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Aftermath

Monday, September 13, 2004

A man doesn't go through all that Malcolm Reynolds has been through--war and torture, invasion, the death of friends--and not pay a price for it.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3912    RATING: 9.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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AFTERMATH

This story incorporates the omitted scenes from an earlier cut of “Serenity,” regarding the aftermath of the Battle of Serenity Valley. It also takes place not only after “War Stories,” “Heart of Gold,” “The Message” and “Objects in Space,” but shortly after the events of Tara O’Shea’s remarkable story, “Lex Talionis.” References are with the gracious permission of its author. If you haven’t read “Lex Talionis,” go read it now since it’s so damned good. If you just have to read this first, then you need to know that “LT” unfolds around a brutal attack on Kaylee, as part of Niska’s elaborately plotted revenge against Mal for having twice made Niska look a fool. Thanks also to Tara for her Mandarin translations, without which—well, I wouldn’t have any Mandarin in this story!

Oh, and by the way, I guess this story is rated PG-13 for some sexual content.

The metal crate hit the cargo bay floor with a bang.

“Dammit, Jayne, will you be careful with those?”

“Hey, it ain’t like they’s breakable,” Jayne answered. “Bunch of ruttin’ horseshoes—weigh a ton, worth a whole hell of a lot less than they weigh.”

“A job’s a job,” Mal shot back, shoving crates into line along the starboard wall. “New Sweden is a metals-poor planet; they’ll take their iron where they can get it.”

“New Sweden is a money-poor planet too. We’ll be lucky not to spend more on fuel than we make movin’ these things. And I’ll have nothin’ but an ache in my back to show for my share.”

Behind him, Jayne heard a crate slam down hard.

“Tamade chùsheng xai-jiao de xiang huo.” Mal stood, arms folded, sweat beaded on his forehead. “I’ve had about enough of you and your griping. Just shut up and move the damned crates like you’re told.”

Jayne turned to lift another crate. “You want me to stop complainin’, you’d better pay me more. Ten percent gets you work; it don’t get you silence.”

The next thing he knew, he was slammed against the bulkhead, Mal’s fingers digging into his shoulders. Jayne wa

Comments
Monday, 13 September 2004 04:57
Great!! You nailed all the characters perfectly I think. Could really feel the heartsickness and confusion from mal.
Monday, 13 September 2004 07:54
Excellent. Like jebbypal said, everyone had their moment. Very well written and extremely insightful not just for Mal but the rest of them as well.

Keep flyin'
Monday, 13 September 2004 08:18
That was a truly excellent character study and analysis. Entirely compelling and convincing. And well written--I was drawn irresistably through from the first word to the last. Very powerful. Characters true to my perceptions, and the interweaving of all the established precepts from the show beautifully handled. Thanks so much for sharing it.

Best line, IMO, was River's:
“It’s not true.” She paused. “There’s so much more they could take from you.”
A wonderful combination of positive and negative wrapped up in one line.
Monday, 13 September 2004 11:32
Absolutely rutting brilliant! I ached so much with the pain of it, the truthsomeness of it, the clarity of the voices and how wonderfully in character everyone was drawn. Poor Mal. Seems only right that it should only be at the very end of his own stages of the gorram cross that Malcolm Reynolds should at last come to the Shepherd. I would so love to see an *aftermath* for Aftermath. To see the healing begin and how it would then flow outward to effect each and every member of Serenity's crew just as the pain and loss and tragedy of the Captain has done. It would elegantly bring this painful burden full circle. Beautiful job, kudos and *xie xie ni*, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 13 September 2004 12:27
Great job! The characterization is very well done and stays true to the characterization shown in the series. :) Thanks for sharing the story with us!
Monday, 13 September 2004 18:33
Loved it. All the characters were pitch-perfect. And Mal's dark night of the soul felt so achingly right. The ending made me get all misty-eyed.

Monday, 13 September 2004 20:05
Fantastic! This story really tugged at my emotions. Will there be a sequal?

ANONYMOUS
Monday, 13 September 2004 23:19
This was incredible! All the characters, especially Mal, felt dead on in their dialogue and feelings they expressed. This whole story was so heartbreakingly good and convincing, the scene with Mal and Kaylee in the engine room had me actually shivering, knowing how she must have felt about her captain treating her like that after Lex Talionis.

Again, I say incredible.
Tuesday, 14 September 2004 04:58
OMG, that was bloody brilliant! I wouldn't change a word.

I loved the scene with Zoe and Mal, just sitting in silence. It was exactly right. And Wash's line - "Lambykins, the man is a mess. He's a melt-down waiting to happen." I could just hear him saying it. And that encounter with Inara - AHHH! I am still misty-eyed.

You nailed the characters, every last one of them. This is now my second favorite Firefly fanfic of all time, running only slightly behind "Lex Talionis."
ANONYMOUS
Tuesday, 14 September 2004 10:38
This rocks!!! ..I think this is the stuff JW wanted to make the fans do and dream about long after the show has gone. Wonderfully well written esp for me the scene between two complex characters like Mal and Inara.
Well done
Malinara
Tuesday, 14 September 2004 17:12
Intense


I could SEE this
Wednesday, 15 September 2004 10:17
You just ripped out my still beating heart! That was so painful and beautiful and full of compassion and understanding. And full of insights too many to list.

I'm so glad Guildsister told me to read this. Even if I do want to go away and cry in a dark corner ....
ANONYMOUS
Friday, 17 September 2004 12:52
Amazing!

Heb
Thursday, 27 January 2005 10:23
hi.
i realize that it has been ages since u wrote this, but i've just joined and i went through all the fanfics just to read them all.
this was a fantastic story. i hadn't read lex talionis yet but went to read it right after. trust me, urs was definitely as good as it's predecessor. u really seemed to know all the characters, and it actually sounded like them talking. a great insight into what ges on in mal's head, and how he always blames himself. very powerful.

xoxox-fredikallow-xoxox
Thursday, 06 October 2005 00:49
What a good angsty fic! I loved it. You captured everyone's emotions really well. I always love fics that dare to explore inside characters' heads.

Nicely done, can't wait for more from you.
Tuesday, 29 August 2006 03:45
What an exceptional piece of fiction! Perfect characterization and the truly relevant themes make this one of the best fan fics I've ever read. Great job! Can't wait to read more of your work!
Wednesday, 16 January 2013 04:01
One of the best. You have examined in detail and explored the consequences -- each and every character rings true in this story.

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