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Not Forgotten

Friday, August 29, 2008

Zoe lives with her grief.

(Part 1 of 3 in the Evocations Trilogy of ficlets, part 2 is Risen)

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Another little vignette; this time a Zoë story. She sure is a tough nut to crack. Here is my best effort; it’s a bit clunky, and I made up a name or two and some history that might not be quite canon. Apologies if details are amiss.

Most characters borrowed from the Firefly ‘Verse, property of Joss Whedon and Fox. Not profiting, just playin’. All feedback is welcomed!

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NOT FORGOTTEN By Nina Clark, 2008.

Ah. So, the moment had ultimately arrived. She stared into the tea, its murky waters reflecting a distant look upon her elegant face. Thoughts stewed around her mind like proverbial tea leaves in a pot, stirred up into turmoil, only to settle at the bottom. I finally forgot, she thought. In the long years since the war, she had had a ritual. A construct of guilt, possibly, in the face of things lost and gained by virtue of her luck and survival. Fanciful, to have let it go on for such an age, but she had clung to it, kept it close. Her bond to something passed.

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In the first days after her release from Genchart, she had made her way to find him. He had left word at the guard-station that he could be found at a boarding house in the Latin Quarter.

At the intersection of two of the town’s less salubrious streets was a house named Saudade. With her battered regulation day-pack swung over her shoulder, she looked up at the building before her. It had endured the rigours of the Alliance occupation thus far unscathed, for despite its slightly run-down, ramshackle appearance it had a kind of proud regality about it.

She felt something at her feet, and looked down at the ginger cat winding its body around her boots. She crouched down to stroke its arching back. It almost raised a smile. Another survivor, she thought, looking back up at the house. In the doorway there now stood a man.

“Made a friend already?” His voice was r

Comments
Friday, 29 August 2008 02:26
Oh, this is wonderful. Simply beautiful. Your scenario feels so right. Zoe always seemed to be one to grasp the small joys in life and appreciate them.

Well done. I enjoyed this very much.
Friday, 29 August 2008 13:25
Absolutely beautiful and so very Zoe. I loved Dori. What a kind, honest, understanding gentle man. I can only think he must have suffered some time in his own past to have such empathy for the hurts of the finally freed Browncoats. Would love to see this from Mal's perspective and then maybe a third piece from Dori. Whatever, it was fabulous. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 29 August 2008 22:24
No worries about your portrayal of Zoe--you are spot-on! I was absorbed from the get-go. Your style is beautiful and a pleasure to read.
NINAC
Tuesday, 16 September 2008 10:36
Thank-you kindly, one and all!

Amdobell; an intriguing idea, a little three-parter. I shall see if anything comes out when I put 'tips to 'board.

Anyway, thanks for the feedback, means a lot.

Nina
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