Blue Sun Room FICTION - DRAMA
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The little things bother him most.
The way she picks up a cup of tea so slowly, carefully, raising it to lips to drink with the deliberation of a two-year old instead of the effortless grace of an adept dancer – as if she no longer trusts her own body to do what she expects.
The way she begins laughing, eyes crinkling with joy, the type of happiness he thinks teenagers her age should experience easily, and then nothing – her voice chokes off abruptly, eyes falling blank and expressionless, staring into places he cannot see.
No – there are no little things.
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Comments
MERRYWYN
Friday, 22 August 2008 03:04
I liked this, you did a good job of capturing Simon's pain in so few words.
Friday, 22 August 2008 09:20
An accurate snapshot and so very Simon that he would be looking for and notice such things. Ali D :~)
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UBIQUIRK
Thursday, 23 October 2008 22:54
Thanks MerryWyn and AMDOBELL! I'm so glad you thought it captured Simon!
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