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Games - Part V

Sunday, August 17, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. The rain begins, and while some folks have fun, Kaylee tells her mother the truth. NEW CHAPTER

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The cloud had gathered quickly, obscuring the sun and darkening the day. The first spots of rain began soon after.

“Well, looks like you were right, Ellie,” Mal said, looking out of the open back door at the drops kicking dust.

Mrs Frye stood next to him, her face untroubled. “You need to learn to trust, Mal.” She smiled. “It’ll get bad, but you’ll be surprised at the speed it clears, considering there ain't gonna be any wind with it.”

“None?”

“Barely a breeze.” She held out a hand, letting it get damp. “Feel.”

Mal did the same. “Warm,” he commented, rubbing the rain between his fingertips. “Somehow I figured … Got warm rain sometimes on Shadow, but mostly it chilled things.”

“This will clean, but not cool.” She wiped her hands together.

“So how long? And consider I’m asking this in your professional capacity.”

She laughed, sounding exactly like her daughter. “I’m not a witch, Captain. But I’d say a fair few hours. Probably be around midnight ‘fore it goes.”

“Any suggestions what we do until then? I mean, apart from eat, which some members of my crew would do until the proverbial cows were heading over the horizon.”

“Well, I’m sure Eddie wouldn’t mind a hand or two of Tall Card.”

“Uh, no. No gambling.”

Ellie blushed. “Sorry. I’d forgotten about Hank.”

Mal put his arm around her and squeezed briefly. “It’s okay. I try and forget about Hank as much as possible too.”

She pushed him away good naturedly. “Well, we could always just have a party. The food’s ready, and the piano’s pretty much in key.”

“Piano?”

“Nothing the Fryes like so much as a good old fashioned singsong.”

He looked dubious. “Ellie, I ain’t sure that’s such a good idea …”

“I’m sure you can sing.” She twinkled at him. “Good looking man like you, I don’t doubt you’ve got the voice to go with it.”

“In the shower. Or to my kids, maybe. When they were small. Lullabies and the like. But that’s about it,” he insisted. “I don’t sing in public.”

“Not even when you’re drun

Comments
Sunday, 17 August 2008 16:41
This was a very special story, Jane, and one of your best. I loved the insight into Kaylee's disposition and how she needed to let go of the fear unless she wanted it to control her forever. Love conquers all, as long as you have faith in the power of love over darkness.

Simon was wonderful in this. This was a great way to let his character's love and hard earned wisdom come through. Everybody needs an Ellie Frye to come home to.
Sunday, 17 August 2008 21:31
I absolutely adore Kaylee's moma, she is the most wise lady in the 'verse and so loving, kind and knowing. The last part where Ellie is talking to Kaylee and reasoning it all out had me in tears. Terrific stuff as always and I also loved the conversation between Mal and Ellie, and Simon letting himself go by stepping out into the rain to jump and dance in puddles with his daughter. He has come such a long way and like River I am proud of him. Proud of you too for making me feel warm and happy inside. *Xie xie ni*, Ali D :~)
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Sunday, 17 August 2008 21:42
Can't say it any better than Katesfriend. Jane, you are an awesome writer and it was one of your best.
Sunday, 17 August 2008 22:59
My hat is off to you, Jane. That was beautifully done. One of the most poignant chapters I've ever read of yours!
Monday, 18 August 2008 02:40
I want to say this right now... You are an outstanding writer. This chapter is one of the bestt I have ever read and I loved the conversation between Ellie and Kaylee. It was touching and wonderfully mothering.

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