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Volcano's Edge - Part XVII

Friday, August 1, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. It's time for Dillon and Alex to leave, but Mal still has some questions that are unanswered. FINAL CHAPTER ... for now.

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An hour later and Alex’s ship was warmed over and ready to go, just waiting on its two most important passengers to shake it off and get back on board.

There was a curious reluctance to say goodbye, and even Dillon found himself giving in to a little procrastination.

“Is Kaylee really going to be okay?” he asked, glancing towards the lower crew quarters, where Simon was checking out his wife for the third time that day. He’d already leaned in and said his farewells, and putting his request to be godfather to that little one too.

“Simon’s good,” Mal said. “And he’s her husband. He’s not going to let anything happen to her, or that baby.”

“Good. Tell him, if he needs anything, just to wave me.”

“I will.”

Dillon looked towards the cargo bay where Freya was saying goodbye to Alex. “I’d better get going, otherwise that man’s likely to leave without me.”

“Serves you right for being too tight to hire your own ship.”

Dillon glared at him. “He was … convenient.”

“More’n that. River says he saved her life.”

“Then I really don’t want to keep him waiting.”

“I’d be beholden if you did. Just for a few minutes.”

The older man was surprised by Mal’s diffidence. “What is it?” he asked, allowing himself to be ushered to the seats in the common area. He waited until the captain had lowered himself, very carefully, into the armchair, sighing as parts of his body that he didn’t even know existed complained. “What can I do for you, Mal?”

“Niska spoke of an Emil Quintana. Simon doesn’t know anything about him, and there’s not much on the Cortex. Feel like doing a little research?”

Dillon nodded slowly. “Sure. It’s not a name I know either, but it’s unusual enough. I see what I can find out.”

“Thanks.” But still Mal didn’t seem to be finished.

“What?” The older man laughed. “It’s not like you to be so reticent.”

“We need a viral replicator.”

Dillon’s eyebrows raised. “What?”

“Niska might have been a psychopath and a sadist, but he was good for one thing. He g

Comments
Friday, 01 August 2008 12:59
Wow! goose bumps. I got goose bumps and it really was Wash.. not just an effect of the drug.
Friday, 01 August 2008 15:27
Standing to applaud....One of your best. Well developed characters and a great twist and turns. Loved it.
Friday, 01 August 2008 16:56
Brava! Very well done and right now I have shivers running up and down my spine.
Friday, 01 August 2008 18:53
Nice summation of their status and what's to come. But there is a direct correlation between the fluffiness of your fluff and the depths of your angst, just in case you never noticed, cuz we have!

I hope Kaylee gets a little confirmation that it was Wash, and not her imagination.
Friday, 01 August 2008 22:50
This really is going to bring together all the threats they've ever faced. Arc on, Jeanne--I mean Jane!

~freeverse
Saturday, 02 August 2008 15:34
Absolutely brilliant, and I loved the way you portrayed everyone especially Mal and River. Feel very sad though that something really bad is building up and needs to be sorted out while our heroes are still in the early stages of healing. Hope you let them rest up and get battle ready before pitching them right into the middle of another Armageddon. Brilliant storytelling as always and much appreciated. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
KIMBO
Sunday, 03 August 2008 17:00
man. finally read the whole way through. this was excellent. I loved how you showed niksa's cowardice when Mal was finally freed. You showed his true self. good stuff. can't wait for the next installment.
Sunday, 03 August 2008 19:42
Excellent arc, Jane. And aptly named as well!
Tuesday, 19 August 2008 18:46
“They’re okay. Hank’s teaching Ben how to tie his shoelaces. They could be a while.”


“Don’t you want to go and heckle?”

I love the way you weave the humor in with the angst. Wonderful.

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