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Volcano's Edge - Part XVI

Thursday, July 31, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. The tables are turned and Mal wreaks vengeance. NEW CHAPTER

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His grey silk suit was stained with sudden icy sweat, and he was trying to back up even further as Mal advanced.

“Still not afraid?” Mal asked, deceptively quiet.

“Guards!” Niska’s artificial voice was loud, abrupt, ringing around the torture room, but no-one came.

“They’re busy,” River said, watching out of the door. There was another dull thud of a grenade, and the floor shivered. “Very busy.” She smiled, feeling the satisfaction from Jayne as he blew a couple more holes in the yacht.

Freya was busy too, searching the nooks and crannies, and she pounced on her own clothes, noting her gun underneath. Quickly she tugged her pants on and pushed her feet into her boots. The shirt was more problematical, catching on the mess of her wrists, but she ignored the aching and left it open. With a suppressed groan she picked up the weaponry and tried to stop the ‘verse from spinning around inside her head.

Alex took a step towards her. “Frey?”

“I'm fine,” she assured him. She looked at her husband, still staring at Niska. “Mal, we need to go.”

“Not done here, xin gan .”

“Mal …”

“He was gonna kill you, Frey. No if’s or maybe’s, but an undeniable fact.”

“I know.” It surprised her still that, even though he was standing there bleeding from so many points, had been so close to death as to be able to shake its hand, it was the danger to her that drove him. “I know, zhang fu .”

He glanced at her. “Can’t let him get away with that.”

As his attention seemed to be split, Niska tried to dart past Mal, but the captain reached out, grabbing hold of his jacket and throwing him against the bulkhead.

“Tryin’ to leave so soon?” he asked, leaning into the old man. “And just when we were gettin’ reacquainted.”

“Please…” The artificial voice held little emotion, but it was there in his eyes, darting from one to the other. “I … I was just …” Pleading. Begging.

Mercy.

“Just what? Obeying orders?”

“I … cannot help what I am.”

“A murdering psychopath with fri

Comments
NINAC
Thursday, 31 July 2008 10:10
Awesome! 'Bout time Niska bought it. Well told...
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Thursday, 31 July 2008 12:18
Glad that he's really dead this time, and loved your description of the bad guys - it was a fitting end for all. Poor Simon - he spent so much of this arc completely frustrated and thwarted. You've opened a whole new case of worms here with the Alliance plans, and it will be very interesting where you go with it. But first some fluff, right?
Thursday, 31 July 2008 14:51
oh yes! this is the kinda grits i like - and you know it:)
but also - there was a lot of finishing up to do in this chapter
and i think you did it well.

I'll be interested though to see the consequences/effects on Mal (and crew)
(if any) from his actions. Good work shipmate!
Thursday, 31 July 2008 14:53
AH-MAZING!! Very very nice! I have enjoyed reading your stories and I can't wait for more!!
Thursday, 31 July 2008 15:00
Nice job. Mal was a stand up man, he killed him fairly quick. Bit worried though about him. Hope all is well.
Thursday, 31 July 2008 16:49
Whew! Glad that sick old man is finally gone. Good riddance!

And there is that can of worms you threw in. I'm sure we'll be hearing about it soon enough, but we do need a bit of a wrap up and fluff to calm both us and the crew.
Thursday, 31 July 2008 19:33
Fabulous! I can actually feel my heartrate approaching something near to normal now that all our people are back on Serenity where they belong. So very relieved that Niska is finally dead - just hope the bad guys don't clone him. Would be nice to see the children make an appearance now that their mummy's and daddy are safe once again. Loved this and superb dialogue too! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 03 August 2008 19:32
Satisfying! Great job!

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