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Volcano's Edge - Part XIII

Friday, July 25, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal is being tortured, but there might be light at the end of the tunnel. NEW CHAPTER

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Kaylee was cold. She could feel the coolness of the metal beneath her reaching up into her body, chilling her to the bone. She managed to pry one eye open enough to see she was only wearing her underthings, and the cotton bra and panties were doing nothing to keep her body temperature up. Her inner voice had been quiet for a while, and she idly wondered if that meant she was freezing to death, but told herself, in no uncertain terms, not to be such a baby. It wasn't that cold. Just … not warm.

Need to get up.

Great. It was back. Can’t, she thought. Nothing works.

Then get dressed. The voice wasn’t sympathetic at all.

Nothing to wear . She felt sure she’d stumped it.

Look.

She didn’t want to. It was so much easier to just lie there, waiting for someone else to make the decision as to what should happen. Maybe she could even go back to sleep. Except it seemed as if the inner voice had control now, and her eyes opened again, falling on her coveralls lying just a few inches from her hand. Except it might as well be half a light year. How? she asked, putting as much venom behind it as she could.

Try.

It was no good. She might be going crazy – hell, going? Already gone, way up in the stratosphere with River. They could probably swap stories using some of those long words the Tams loved so much. No. Stick to the plan. If I have one. She took a deep breath and reached out towards her clothes. Her fingers twitched. Come on, Kaylee-girl , she said to herself. Gotta do this. Relying on you.

This time her hand moved enough to touch the rough fabric, and it seemed to galvanise her. Closing her fingers, she pulled the coveralls towards herself, then wondered what to do next.

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There was a break in the immediate pain, but Mal almost wished the torturer was still working. Anything to keep Niska’s attention away from Freya.

He was studying her as if she was a specimen under a microscope. His voice

Comments
Friday, 25 July 2008 12:55
*Wode ma* that Niska is the living embodiment of everything that is sick and evil. Hope our heroes hurry before all that is left of our valiant Captain is a sticky goo. I felt sure earlier on when Kaylee is hearing voices in her head that it was Freya projecting to her but maybe not, maybe she does have an internal voice to egg her on when needs be. Hurry up with the next part please, preferrably while I still have some fingernails left! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 25 July 2008 14:50
Um....ick? Is it River in Kaylee's head, or the future Tam to be? Hurry up with the rescuing.
Friday, 25 July 2008 18:39
No no no no no no NO! Oh dear! Hurrah for Kaylee talking herself into action (doesn't anyone else suffer from in internal dialogue around here, like when you're trying to get up early in the morning? I do!). Now, River and the big guns, please! And Simon able to put aside his worry for Kaylee and their child long enough to save Mal (with backing from Alex?), but sans Faustian bargains, I hope? And wait, what about the Pax?

So many questions, such compulsive site-checking, Jane!

~freeverse
Friday, 25 July 2008 21:49
"Mal is being tortured" not half! my god.
actually this was also an action packed and pretty meticulous chapter - lotta strands well woven.
Saturday, 26 July 2008 01:16
Volcano's edge indeed. You've got us all hanging there, Jane! Great work!
Saturday, 26 July 2008 03:26
I'm hanging here by a thread too and can't wait for the Big Damm Rescue. It better come fast or I'll have a major heart attack.
Saturday, 26 July 2008 14:46
SOOO good, but the more I read the more I want to rip my hair out of my head. :)

Though we need to talk about this, torturing Mal?! What's that about?! :))

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