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Volcano's Edge - Part IX

Wednesday, July 16, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Jayne is missing, and someone has a tale to tell. NEW CHAPTER

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3753    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“River, River, please.” Simon was desperately trying to calm his sister. She was on the verge of attempting to force him out of her path, almost at the point of violence in her desire to get to the cargo bay doors.

“Have to find him!” She gripped his forearms until she could hear the bones grating. “I have to find him!”

“The Cap’s out there looking,” Kaylee said, her own hands clasped tightly in front of her, fully aware of the damage the young woman could do if she decided to. “He’ll find Jayne.”

“River. You’re hurting me.” Simon tried not to let it show, but it was there, pain written clear on his pale features.

“What?” For a moment she didn’t move, staring into his face, her eyes ragged and disturbed. Then she let go as if from a red hot poker. “I didn’t mean to …” She hugged herself instead, darting for the door, but Zoe was in the way.

“Wait for the captain,” the tall woman said.

“Need to … have to …”

“Wait, River.”

Simon was at her side again. “ Mei-mei , I don’t want to sedate you -”

“No needles!”

“But I will if I have to.”

She stared at him, pleading. “I just want him back.”

“Then try and calm down.”

Finally she nodded jerkily and took a great, shuddering breath, drawing on the hidden reserves of strength within her. Simon silently thanked Freya for helping his sister find even a modicum of control.

“Better,” he said, putting his arm around her shoulders. “River … is Jayne hurt? Can you tell?”

She unfocused a moment. “Unconscious.”

“River, honey, he’ll be okay,” Hank said, keeping his tone gentle. “Mal and Freya are going to find him.”

“They won’t.”

“What?”

“They won’t find him. Niska has him.”

For a moment Simon wasn’t sure he’d heard. “Niska?”

---

As they ran from the church, the four of them headed for the only cover around, a scrubby bush next to an abandoned building, deep in the morning shadows.

“He was here.” Mal was down on his heels. “Boot marks.”

“Freshly dead insects,” Freya agreed. “But no sign

Comments
Wednesday, 16 July 2008 10:12
Excellent! Everybody said and did things I was really aching for them to do and more, truly terrific. And the bit at the end where Mal wants Alex to teel them what he is doing out there is right on the money. Sorry to Freya but I really don't trust him. Could be he's the one who put the tag on the ship for all we know. And please, please, please let Kaylee get a trace on where that transmitter came from. Oh, and don't kill Jayne, *dong ma*? Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 16 July 2008 10:13
Ooops, that should be tell not teel. Sorry. My computer can't spell. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 16 July 2008 14:00
This as always, was amazing. I have been waiting patiently and will continue to wait, but hurry it up, dong ma? :)
Wednesday, 16 July 2008 16:32
No killing Jayne. LOL! Other than that, it was very excellent. I am waiting here ready for the next part. Ummm...I'm still waiting. LOL!

Wednesday, 16 July 2008 20:07
The first few chapters left me wishing they were longer (probably becuase I've been rereading your other fisc in gulps. The last two, though, have left me more and more worried (and secretly pleased to be so!). The crew aren't playing horror-movie stupid--they're figuring out the elements of the bad guys game, but there is as yet to clear indication they're connected the disparate pieces--like Theo's warning that some entity is after Dr. Tam.... This from the spectator who never could guess the killer in those dinner theater games, so I suppose it's totally believeable.
You and that other Jane (Austen) are rocking my summer reading, Jane!
~freeverse
Thursday, 17 July 2008 15:32
Poor, poor River! And more to the point, poor Jayne, in the hands of a psychopath without so much as Binky to defend himself with! Yikes!
Thursday, 17 July 2008 15:33
Poor, poor River! And more to the point, poor Jayne, in the hands of a psychopath without so much as Binky to defend himself with! Yikes!

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