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Volcano's Edge - Part IV

Thursday, July 3, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. A discovery, and a capture tab, but still no closer to finding out who's dogging them. NEW CHAPTER

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The cargo bay doors slid open, but not fast enough for Mal. He slipped through a gap not wide enough, and banged his elbow on the thick metal, but he ignored the pins and needles it set up down his arm. Instead he skidded to a halt in his stocking feet at the bottom of the ramp.

“Hank?”

The pilot gave a shaky smile as he helped support Peter Frye. “We’re okay, Mal,” he said, his speech somewhat slurred. “Well, maybe not okay, but we’re not hurt particularly.” The young man almost slipped from his shoulder, but Mal was there in a moment, taking his weight, letting Hank gather himself. “Thanks.”

Freya had followed her husband and was staring out into the darkness, her shotgun still cocked. “Is there anyone still out there?” she asked.

“Just us chickens,” Hank said, tripping and falling to his hands and knees. “ Chun ben.

“Stay there,” Simon called, pulling a sweater on over his sweat pants as he ran through the bay.

“Don’t think I can move far, doc.” Hank tried to grin but it wasn’t quite right, twisting his mouth as it did. “And I think a marathon is out of the question.”

“Pete?” Kaylee was behind him, and tried to dart out but Mal’s voice stopped her.

“Kaylee, call Jayne,” Mal said quickly. “Get him to bring your folks here. We’ll look to your brother.”

The young mechanic glared at him but his tone was the one he used when he expected to be obeyed, no matter what. “I’ll be right back,” she promised Pete, running up the stairs towards the bridge, crossing with Zoe as she ran down, her gun in her hand.

Simon was already examining Hank. “No major wounds or anything?” he asked.

“Nope. Nothing that a few weeks sleep won’t cure.”

“Headache? Any –“

“Doc,” Mal interrupted. “Can we do this in the infirmary? Pete ain’t exactly a lightweight, and I’d rather we all got out of the light soon as we can. Seeing as we’re very pretty targets right now.”

“Oh. Yes, I'm sorry.” Simon lifted Hank to his feet. “Can you walk?”

“Got this far, didn’t I?” He looke

Comments
Thursday, 03 July 2008 19:54
Yep, something definitely sending a message and to the Captain specifically. Whoever it is wants him to sweat and worry for a while so I'm thinking they won't do anything else for a little while, just watch and enjoy the panic building. I surely wish one of our gorram genuis Readers would pick up something useful. River's shudder at the end made me all manner of twitchy with worry, especially for the children. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 03 July 2008 22:28
great chapter - and the ending...
oh it was good - a lovely icy moment.
Thursday, 03 July 2008 22:54
Lovely, lovely, lovely work from start to finish. Last line with just enough menace to make me love it! :D
Thursday, 03 July 2008 23:16
Pure genius, both you and River. You've got me hooked, especially with the last line.
Friday, 04 July 2008 00:13
You are such a tease! Here I was all geared up for angst and all I get is tension and plot development and more escalation. Loved the interaction between Mal and Kaylee - he'll try to protect her from anything. You are making this story even more creepy by the prolongation of it - but you know that, don't you?
Friday, 04 July 2008 01:15
Wow! Still on vaca and here you are teasing and spinning your yarn without me. Great stuff! I can feel the tension mounting and am very curious where this one will end up!!

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