Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Out To The Black --- Chapter 20

Monday, June 30, 2008

Takes place two weeks after the previous chapter. Allan gets some wheels and goes to a party. Also a certain doctor gets his head out of his Pi-gu.

This chapter ends this particular story arc. Allan and the crew of Serenity shall return though... I promise.

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Out to the black Chapter 20

Disclaimer: Joss, Fox, Universal Own em’. I’m just playing. No money being made.

This is my first Fan Fiction ever. Constructive reviews are shiny.

This fic takes place two years after Serenity (BDM) and has the established couples of Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara, Zoë/OC and a budding Jayne/River romance.

A/N: The chapter takes place two weeks after Chapter 19.

Thanks again Chris for the beta…

Out to the black

Chapter Twenty – Recovery

“Zoë, just shoot me… It would be easier,” Allan grumbled.

“Would you quit bellyaching?” She replied, “You act like you never had anyone help you dress yourself.”

“I was five I think last time…”

“Well that’s how old yer actin,” Zoë replied in an exasperated tone as she slipped a t-shirt over the cast on Allan’s left arm, “Now try ta lean forward so I can get this on you.”

Knowing better than to say anything else, Allan complied, Zoë slipping the shirt over his head.

“Now Jayne loaned you a pair o’ shorts that should fit over yer casts…”

”Shorts from Jayne?”

“I did wash em’ first,” Zoë said a slight smile curving her lips.

Five minutes later, Allan was dressed in an old pair of Jayne’s cargo shorts and one of his own t-shirts. Zoë stepped back to admire her handiwork.

“There, you feelin a bit more civilized now?”

Alan took a deep breath. At least that didn’t hurt so much anymore. His broken ribs were healing quickly. Allan smiled at the beautiful chocolate skinned woman who said she loved him.

“I do. Thank you Zoë. I… I’m sorry for being such a pain in the ass. I’ve been taking care of myself a long time. This is just so damn frustrating being stuck in this bed with only one working limb.”

Zoë crossed her arms over her chest, and glared at Allan. “You done ventin?”

Allan nodded, “Suppose so.”

Zoë leaned forward and kissed Allan, “I know this is hard for you baby. Hell iffin I were in your place, I’d a shot someone long before now.”

Allan laughed a bit, a smile on his face,

Comments
Tuesday, 01 July 2008 07:43
Great work! I love how the crew is uncomfortable when they see Allan in the Hawaiian shirt, but it's good that he and Zoe talked. She'll never forget Wash, he'll never forget Sara ... but that's as it should be. Now it's time for them to get on with their lives. And Simon and Kaylee? Excellent! Looking forward to the new arc.
Tuesday, 01 July 2008 14:23
Yeah, the shirt conversation was definitely a nice touch. Can't wait for more.
CMTAYLOR531
Sunday, 18 August 2013 15:25
I had to register just to review this story. No idea if you are still active here or not but regardless I had to leave you praise. This story was fabulous. Sucked me right in. Generally when OC are heavily present they are just meh for me. However, Allen is a breath of fresh air. You made him fit into this rat tag family quite well. He has a great background story and he just clicks. I'm looking forward to reading the sequel and seeing where you takes us.

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