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Out To The Black --- Chapter 19

Saturday, June 28, 2008

The crew begin's searching for Allan

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Out to the black Chapter 19

Disclaimer: Joss, Fox, Universal Own em’. I’m just playing. No money being made.

This is my first Fan Fiction ever. Constructive reviews are shiny.

This fic takes place two years after Serenity (BDM) and has the established couples of Simon/Kaylee, Mal/Inara, Zoë/OC and a budding Jayne/River romance.

A/N A little less angst this chapter…

Out to the black

Chapter Nineteen – Search

River flew Serenity almost as if she were a living and breathing autopilot. Her hands sure on the controls as the ship entered atmo over Kelly. Her mind and emotions were somewhere else.

Jayne stood behind River while she flew. His big hands on her tiny shoulders, trying to offer what little comfort he could to the little psychic assassin that had stolen his heart. Jayne’s mind was in turmoil. If Allan hadn’t killed the pirates that had attacked them with their own missiles, the big merc would have gladly done it with his bare hands. In the short time he had known Allan, the big man had come to respect the older man. Considered him a friend. Jayne didn’t have many friends.

Mal sat in the co pilot’s seat, staring out the windows as Serenity, dropped through the atmosphere of Kelly. No he thought, it wasn’t the co pilot’s seat anymore. Just like the chair that River sat in as she flew the ship was still called Wash’s chair. The one Mal now sat in would now always be known as Allan’s chair.

Simon sat in the navigator’s seat behind Mal. Kaylee in his lap, her head buried in his shoulder as she sobbed, soaking his shirt with her tears.

Inara entered the bridge, trying her best not to break down. Using all of her companion training to keep her own sorrow at bay. She wasn’t having much luck. She strode up to Mal. the Captain pulled the former companion into his lap.

“Anything Mal?” Inara said, emotion straining her voice.

“Nothing,” Mal said shaking his head, “We’re flying the track he took down but it don’t look good… How’s Zoë?”

“In her bunk. She wouldn’t

Comments
KK
Saturday, 28 June 2008 01:29
Very, very good! Suprisingly, this is the first in this series that i've read...and yet I was still able to walk right into the story and completely enjoy it! You did very, very well!
Saturday, 28 June 2008 13:54
Awesome. And good to see that he can crack jokes after a fall like that.
Saturday, 28 June 2008 16:03
I'm just picking up here, but I like this so much I'm going to have to go back and read ever other thing. Very Firefly, very emotional. Just excellent.

Joanna
Sunday, 29 June 2008 01:45
What a relief! I could visualize the whole thing. Allan's landing reminded me of an item I read about a stewardess who survived freefall from 30,000 feet (over Czechoslovakia?), falling through dense evergreens into snow. Keep flying, Brian! I can't help thinking that the Alliance is going to take an interest in Allan--or perhaps BlueSun, in their founder!

~freeverse
Sunday, 29 June 2008 12:15
Freeverse... You sure you're not River in disguise??

You keep pulling all my potential plot bunnies outta my head...

Brian
Monday, 30 June 2008 07:41
You packed so much into this chapter I was out of breath by the time I finished it! And Allan's safe, if not unharmed. Still, it gives Zoe the chance to coddle him a little, and for them to get closer. And I agree with freeverse - Blue Sun are going to be involved somewhere ...

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