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Volcano's Edge - Part I

Thursday, June 26, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Start of the two story 'big' arc. The crew visit Kaylee's family on Phoros. You know me by now. A little fluff before the descent into angst ... NEW STORY

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“Haven’t you ever known you were going to see an old friend, even though you believed he was off-world? Or didn’t do something because you just knew it was going to go wrong? We all have them – psychic flashes. But by extension there are those individuals who sit between us and the powerful psychics like River and Freya. We saw what happened with Grace, when she had her abilities turned on, the almost overwhelming nature of it. Suppose that was multiplied a thousand times, a million… Less than one tenth of one percent, Mal, that’s what she said on Miranda. That’s about right for the kind of psychic ability I’m talking about.” Simon, OPPORTUNITIES

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They swung by Persephone on their way to Phoros, burying the remains of their friends under the small stand of trees. Jayne dug the grave with varying degrees of assistance from Hank and Simon, and River collected soft grass and flowers for inside while Kaylee engraved the headstone.

“What do you want on it?” Kaylee asked, knowing Mal was standing at her back, watching carefully as she finished inscribing the date. “Not really enough room for all the names, ‘less I write ‘em small.”

“Road Runner,” he said softly. “That’s all it needs. It’s what they were, Road Runner’s family.”

Shr ah .”

Still, as they laid the box to rest, Mal noticed she’d managed to put the crew’s names anyway, even if it wasn't clear from any distance. He had to smile. If anything like that ever happened to them, he hoped there’d be someone around to make sure they were buried right. No. He corrected himself. He hoped something like that never happened to them.

After the small ceremony, where he read a passage from Book’s old Bible, most of the crew moved off, while he stayed at Freya’s side. She’d made a small posy from more wild flowers, and was staring at the smallest stone that marked their daughter.

“I miss her too,” he said quietly. “I can only imagine what she’d’ve been like.”

Freya glanced at him, and he was pleased to note

Comments
Thursday, 26 June 2008 19:02
All that fluff and then wham! just a few words to raise the hair on the back of my neck! Eagerly awaiting more! :D
Thursday, 26 June 2008 19:44
Holy crap! Lull us with all the happy and fluff and then hit us with the evil nasty *tamade hundans* coming after them. You would think with a couple of Readers on board and some pyschic kids that at least SOMEONE would have an inkling something was wrong. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 26 June 2008 20:00
You're awful...all that fluff and then throw that last paragraph in. Makes for a good story though.
Thursday, 26 June 2008 20:32
"He could wait. He was good at that."

this l'il wytch however is known for the lack of patience - begin the BIG in!:)
you did promise the big...

of course you played the reader here like the seasoned pro you are)
Thursday, 26 June 2008 23:16
Um, is this a new bad guy or a formerly dead bad guy or something of your own creation?
Friday, 27 June 2008 00:58
The first part made me cry, the middle made me laugh, the almost last made me sigh, and then the last part made me...WANT MORE NOW!! Okay, so I will be on vacation, but you are such a stroy teller. Makes me want more.
Friday, 27 June 2008 03:48
You try explaining in mixed company why you suddenly laughed out loud, after this exchange:

'There was a silence, then a click. Jayne looked at River for clarification.

“Mal drew on Hank,” she explained.

Jayne grinned. “Yeah, that’d do it.”'

Thanks Jane!
~freeverse

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