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Old Habits - Part XIV

Saturday, June 21, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Is Mal totally fong luh in letting Becca accompany him to Kendrick's ship? Maybe ... NEW CHAPTER

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Mal flew the shuttle in silence, obeying Persephone’s sky laws and skirting the residential district by a good ten miles. It doubled the time, but at least he wasn’t challenged. The way he was feeling he’d probably say something he’d regret and be blasted out of the firmament. Once free of the city limits, though, he headed straight for the co-ordinates Badger had given him, flying low and fast, occupying himself with wondering how he could ever have been attracted to Becca.

She was pretty, that was for sure, although the years since he’d last seen her had hardened her somewhat, taken the gild off her shine, tarnished that prettiness. Truth was, though, his Freya just got more beautiful, but he could see time hadn’t left Becca unmarked.

As they approached their landing area, he glanced back into the body of the shuttle. He could see she was dozing, her chin dropped to her chest. She’d always been like that, he remembered. Even back in the disbursement camps, when there was so much noise he thought he’d never sleep again, she’d always been able to get some shuteye. Nothing seemed to phase that woman.

He banked sharply, bringing the small vehicle in to touch down, and allowed a slight smile of satisfaction to lift his lips as he heard a yelp from behind him. Shame, but it appeared the unexpected manoeuvre had apparently deposited Becca onto the floor.

As the shuttle settled and he shut down the engines, she leaned over him, rubbing her rear end.

“Did you have to do that?” she asked peevishly.

“Do what?” He got to his feet and pushed past her, picking up a small back pack on the way.

She scowled at him. “That innocent look didn’t work before, Mal. I can’t say it’s improved, either.”

“Don’t know what you’re talking about.” He slid the door open, tasting dust from where the engine had kicked it up.

She slid up behind him and peered out. “So where’s Kendrick’s ship?”

“Half an hour’s walk.”

She glared at him. “What? Why didn’t you land closer?”

He explained patiently.

Comments
Saturday, 21 June 2008 11:09
Oh yeah, great to see the tables turned on that evil conniving Becca. I'm guessing Mal was wearing Zoe's bullet proof vest. I know I would be if I went anywhere with that lying and nasty *pofu*. I am so happy, figured Mal had a notion it was Becca all along behind what happened to the Road Runner. Can't wait to see what happens next. Fantastic way to pull the metaphorical rabbit out of the gorram hat, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 21 June 2008 12:51
I, in a way feel sorry for Becca. Her family was burned to death by this asshole, but then she put a bullet in Mal. Can't forgive her much for that one.

Great story as always.
Saturday, 21 June 2008 13:13
Wow, great job! Thrilling right up to the cliffhanger. What a hard lesson to learn - that vengeance only makes everything worse - especially yourself. Looks like Mal learned that lesson when he confronted Kendrick the first time, but Becca wasn't going to listen to anything but her own hatred. Great job pulling all these storylines together for this - looking forward to more!
Saturday, 21 June 2008 16:54
Becca just let her desire for vengeance get the better of her. And she sure as shoot shouldn't have shot out captain! I feel bad for her too. I hope Freya takes mercy on her, after she roughs her up a bit.

Joanna
Saturday, 21 June 2008 17:30
i just enjoy how well worked out your character of becca is - tricky thing to make a character act unexpectedly (as B has often done) to keep the reader guessing
but also to make those actions seem plauisble and IN character (ultimately).
well done:)

- if i made any sense there! -
WOONSOCKET
Saturday, 21 June 2008 19:37
Isn't it funny how two people can learn such different things from the same circumstances.
Nice job showing what Mal could have become if he hadn't learned to care.
Sunday, 22 June 2008 01:39
What a great chapter! So very enjoyable to read from start to finish! Well done!
Sunday, 22 June 2008 04:30
SUrprise,surprise. Knew Mal had something up his sleeve. I can't wait to see Becca pay the price.

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