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R-a-y-n-e Part 2

Monday, June 16, 2008

River and Jayne play a game.

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R-a-y-n-e Part 2/?

Title: R-a-y-n-e part 2/?

Author: Gilove2dance

Rating: G

Pairings: Pre-Rayne

Disclaimer: Joss is Boss and therefore I don't own anything.

Author's notes: Post BDM though someone is alive because I will never be able to accept their death. First ever firefly fanfic!

Summary: River and Jayne continue to bond.

Previous Chapter:

A/N: You know you’ve read too much Rayne when certain concepts have been categorized as canon in your brain. I’m so completely sorry if any of this seems similar to a story you have already read…my brain doesn’t know what’s real or not any more. And so sorry for the delay. I had to make a 5 minute movie for tech class which meant over 70 hours of computer animating and film editing and actual filming with my actors on green screen and on set….so stressful but I’m finally DONE!!!!

Chapter 2: Bonding

Jayne collapsed onto his weight bench. It had been a while since he had lifted any so it was best to start off slowly. He enjoyed the solid repetition of a mindless workout. He found calm in it much like Inara’s yoga she sometimes does. Jayne closed his eyes and just pumped the bar out from his chest. He felt someone staring at him. He could tell by the way the hair on the back of his neck prickled.

“Leave me alone, Crazy,” he growled.

“The chase is no longer frivolous if the prey is no longer hunted,” River said mournfully. Jayne’s cunning orange hat was swallowing her head. She was leaning over him, a hand on either side of the bench near his waist.

“I’m old, girl. I can only run after you for so long ‘fore my lungs give out.” He snatched his hat off her and pushed her away so he could sit up. She sat in on the bench in front of him. “And now I got it back.” River stuck her tongue out. Jayne snorted and tweaked her nose.

“You aren’t old. Captain Daddy and Zoë are much older than you.”

“I’m old enough that runnin’ around gits me tired out right fast.”

Comments
Monday, 16 June 2008 03:10
Very very good. I enjoyed the way Jayne and River are bonding. It is very cute and the way he stood up for her...even better.
KK
Friday, 27 June 2008 01:41
Very cute.

(Mal grimaced. “If it progresses more, I will have to shoot him.” Simon shuddered in agreement. Inara shrugged.) Oh, that was priceless! Mal's statement, Simon's shudder and Inara's indifferent shrug was perfect! Keep Rayne-ing!

You can't take the sky from me!

P.S. I think you would enjoy my old series "Dancing". Please tell me what you think, if you have time!
KK
Wednesday, 02 July 2008 02:21
Oh, and forgot to mention...

I thought it was so funny how when River mentioned the Academy, Jayne finally agreed to do something with her. I believe the government-trained assasin knows exactly how to get the big mercenary to do whatever she wants. :) More please!!

You can't take the sky from me!

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