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Out To The Black --- Chapter 11

Monday, June 16, 2008

The crew recovers from the Blue Hand's attack. Zoe has a one sided conversation with Wash and then takes a big step.

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Out to the black Chapter 11

Disclaimer: Joss, Fox, Universal Own em’. I’m just playing. No money being made.

This is my first Fan Fic ever. Constructive reviews are shiny.

This fic takes place two years after Serenity (BDM) and has the established couples of Simon/Kaylee and Mal/Inara along with a Jayne/River friendship. Might become Rayne later… Maybe

Out to the black

Chapter Eleven – First kiss

Allan made his way aft from the bridge down to the common area and the infirmary. Entering he saw Zoë cleaning the blood and brains off the wall belonging to the two blue hands that he and Serenity’s first mate had killed. The bodies were nowhere to be seen. Kaylee and Inara were sitting on the sofa, still groggy from the tranquilizer darts that they had been struck with.

River Sat in the recliner, right arm in a sling. She seemed a bit out of it as well. Simon was still in the infirmary, still working over Mal who still appeared unconscious.

“How’s Mal?” Allan asked Zoë.

“Still out, Simon thinks he’s got a concussion and maybe a minor skull fracture. Know more in a couple of hours”

Nodding, Allan turned and stuck his head into the infirmary, “Anything you need Simon?”

Simon turned to the older man and sighed, “Can you check on Kaylee and Inara? I’m kind of busy here.”

“Sure thing Doc, anything else?”

“Would you be able to draw some blood from them? I need to see what they were drugged with.”

“Been a while but I think I remember how,” Allan replied.

“Blood draw set is in the third drawer on the left”

“Got it, back in a bit”

“Thank you Allan”

Allan took the supplies and walked over to Kaylee on the sofa. Kneeling down, he shined a small light in Kaylee’s eyes, checking her pupils. “How ya doing there Kaylee?”

“Feel yucky,” the young woman slurred.

“I bet. I’m gonna draw some blood so Simon can figure out what they hit you with. That okay?”

“Mmm, hmm” Kaylee mumbled.

“You’re going to feel a little stick,” Allan said as he slid the needle into

Comments
Monday, 16 June 2008 07:46
I like Allan, and I think he'll be good for Zoe, but they're moving pretty quick. Like she said, they've only known each other for a week, and maybe they need to slow down a bit. But I really like River's last line.
Monday, 16 June 2008 12:36
Thanks Jane. True, Zoe is moving a bit quick but Allan's kind of a traditional guy. It's been a long time since he's been in a relationship and he will want to do things right. Plus Zoe's going to be busy until Mal is well again and there's still the matter of salvaging Allan's ship. A ways to go yet.

Brian
Monday, 23 June 2008 15:13
just catching up on this - intersting directions in your BDM verse...

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