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Old Habits - Part XI

Friday, June 13, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. In which Kaylee reports on her findings, Mal tells a story, and Freya comes to a decision. But remember, things may not be as they seem ... NEW CHAPTER

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“Kaylee?”

“What?”

“Can I come in?”

“If you want.”

River ducked her head under the doorway and walked into the engine room. Kaylee was sitting in her hammock, her legs drawn up under her, staring at a piece of the metal she‘d brought back from the remains of Road Runner. Her work bench was strewn with more bits, engine parts that had been eviscerated and damaged beyond almost all recognition.

“Are you sure?” the young psychic said.

“’Bout what?”

“That it was an accident.”

“Ain't said yet.” She sniffed hard, wiping at her nose with the back of her hand and leaving a stain of grease on her skin.

“But you’re going to.”

Kaylee’s eyes narrowed. She knew, like the rest of them, that her sister-in-law’s abilities weren't up to full strength because of the measles she’d had, but this … “You reading me?”

River shook her head. “Not really. But there’s a shape to the fog, edges, and I can guess at its meaning.”

“I don’t understand.”

“You’re going to tell Mal it was an accident,” River said softly.

“Nothing to say otherwise, least that I can see.” She didn’t have any more tears left to cry, but that didn’t stop the lump in her throat. “There ain't enough left of anything to work with, that’d tell me anything at all, so … Just a big old explosion that tore her apart.”

“Are you sure?” River took the object from Kaylee’s unresisting fingers, and gasped at the shock that ran up her arms like electricity, tightening her jaw, splitting into her brain.

“River?” Kaylee looked up in alarm.

“I … Kaylee, are you sure?”

“No, I ain't sure!” She felt a flash of anger burn through her. “But don’t you think I’d say if I thought it was deliberate?”

“I …” River couldn’t speak, the blood draining from her face. Images, piling one on another: Burton on the bridge, Yuki in the galley, Terry, Brogan, McFee … on and on and all screaming soundlessly.

“Are you okay?”

“I … no …” She held out the lump of metal, not physically capable of letting go, feeling the phantom he

Comments
Friday, 13 June 2008 13:01
How come with two Readers on board no one noticed how much Becca was lapping this up? Not a one of them with a suspicion of her hand in any of this? Or is Mal playing out the scene to draw her out? I surely hope the last line is what is happening because the thought of Mal throwing away his happiness, the wife and family he adores, the crew he would die to protect, for something as poisonous as revenge is like pressing a self distruct button with no thought of who else will be caught up in the explosion. I am just hoping that River is staying sharp and picks up on what Becca is thinking, can trap the evil witch before too many other good people get hurt by her. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 13 June 2008 13:46
Wow! Becca is one twisted girl. She makes an awesome villian. What is here next move and who will it effect?! You are a very talented spider, who weaves a very intricate web....keep spinning!
Friday, 13 June 2008 16:56
I have to agree with Amdobell. Only time will tell if this was a show for Becca's sake.
KIMBO
Friday, 13 June 2008 20:43
this better be a damn trick of Mal's. Cuz if it isn't. i'll kill him myself! this is great. becca is a bitch and more soon?
Saturday, 14 June 2008 01:26
Wow! What an intense chapter! Ruthless, headed down the warpath Mal...a sight to behold.
Saturday, 14 June 2008 01:41
I smell a scam going on with River, Mal and Freya.
Monday, 16 June 2008 08:54
i'm wondering if Becca is some sort of shielded reader herself...
Friday, 20 June 2008 01:16
This is something I can see the 'old' Mal doing. Don't know about the 'new' Mal. But I really want to see where it goes...

Joanna

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