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Old Habits - Part VIII

Sunday, June 8, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Becca is annoying everyone, but there's a visitor on the horizon. NEW CHAPTER

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Forty hours later, Serenity was that much closer to Persephone, and Becca had been prying into almost everyone’s affairs.

She’d spent pretty much all of the first day in the engine room, asking questions about Serenity, about the accelerator core, passing tools as needed.

“You know a bit more’n I’d’a thought about engines,” Kaylee declared, impressed.

“I’ve had to. Moving around like I do, sometimes it’s the only thing between me and the great black out there. Besides, some of the engineers I've been around have been cute, too.” She laughed. “If I hadn’t learned to talk about catalyzers and pin locks, I wouldn’t’ve had nearly as good a time.”

“Know what you mean.” Kaylee wiped her hands on a cloth at her waist, remembering her first time on board, and silently thanking Bester. Without him, she not only prob’ly be dirtside still, but she wouldn’t have Simon, Bethie and Hope. “Although I ain't an engineer. Just a mechanic.”

“I don’t think there’s anything just about you.” Becca grinned. “Anyone who can keep a Firefly in the air should have the title to go with it.”

“I don’t mind,” the young woman said, feeling the blush warming her cheeks. “And I love this boat. Have since the moment I set my eyes on her.”

“I can see why.” Becca looked around at the old metal, paint covering some parts, rust others, unable to keep a trace of condescension out of her voice.

Kaylee bridled a little. “Oh, I know she maybe ain't the newest thing around, but she’s home.”

Becca smiled. “Home to a lot of people. That big guy … Jayne, is it?”

“That’s him.”

“How come the name?”

Kaylee shrugged. “Wouldn’t know. Don’t even think about that now. He’s just Jayne.”

“I suppose it was his parents’ idea of a joke.”

“Nope. His parents … well, I met his Ma. She was a real nice lady, and I don’t think she was gonna do that to a son of hers.”

“But then why –“

“I don’t know!” Kaylee sounded a little exasperated. “Look, Becca, we’re just folks. We don’t care what happened befo

Comments
Sunday, 08 June 2008 10:37
Who's the Road Runner? Beep beep! And why oh why do none of the readers on the ship know what Becca is up to? Or is she causing the fog that stops them seeing and sensing properly? I really wish they'd fire her into the atmo and be done with it but then we'd never find out would we? Just hope none of our folks end up hurt because of that horirble girl. I kept wishing Kaylee would stop clattering on to her, telling her all about the engine and Serenity's workings just put my teeth on edge. Didn't Kaylee learn anything from Saffron duping them? Sigh. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 08 June 2008 13:09
Why is it that Becca rubs me wrong? Like Amodobell, I say just get rid of her, but then we wouldn't have story would we.?
Sunday, 08 June 2008 16:49
I love River defending the plastic dino from Becca. Very cool. Becca is definitely there for something other than just a ride. Loving it...
KIMBO
Sunday, 08 June 2008 17:57
Who is the road runner? why the hell is that becca so nosy? what is she up to? anyway. More soon! this is great!
Monday, 09 June 2008 00:34
So what was Becca fiddling with in the cargo bay? Shades of Saffron appearing here? Was Mal gullible enough to be taken in by Becca too? Too bad the readers aren't in the know.
Monday, 09 June 2008 00:41
Ditto what the others have said. But I think the general rule should be that non-crew type individuals can not go to the bridge or the engine room? All in favor?
WOONSOCKET
Monday, 09 June 2008 20:39
Actually, the fact that Becca even rubs your readers the wrong way is the sign of very good characterization on your part.
Now how about a few that we like? please?
Wednesday, 11 June 2008 09:23
ha ha! love the reaction here to Becca.

some very nice exchanges between mal and river this chapter.

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