Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Old Habits - Part III

Friday, May 30, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Zoe and Freya enter The Spa, while their husbands wait anxiously. NEW CHAPTER

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Hank brought the shuttle in to land at the small port, nestling it cheek by jowl with the other vehicles already parked, most of which could have bought Serenity a dozen times over. The latest two seater runabouts were probably the most vulgar, but there were plenty of older, well-looked after craft, and the pilot hoped they’d get lost in the crowd.

“We’re down,” he called over his shoulder, shutting everything down.

Mal looked at the two women in front of him. “You good to go?”

Zoe nodded. “That we are.”

“I guess.” Freya was checking through her bag once more.

“Frey, you’ve got everything,” Mal said quietly, smiling at her.

“I don’t know. I just get the feeling I'm missing something.”

“Your guns,” Hank put in, coming through from the small bridge.

“Probably. I feel naked without them,” she admitted, running one hand down her hip.

“Well, Zoe is your bodyguard, so she can go armed instead.” Mal took the bag and handed it to his first mate, knowing she was wearing his wife’s shoulder holster under her jacket. “You know what you’ve got to do. Soon as you can, let me know you’re inside. We’ll be listening.”

“Yes sir.”

“Bring me back a bottle or something,” Hank said, sounding a lot more relaxed than he felt.

“Any particular vintage?” Zoe asked.

“Whatever you think will suit my fine tastebuds.”

“Beer, then.”

“Hey, I’ll have you know I’ve drunk some of the finest champagne known to man!” He grinned. “Well, for under ten credits, anyway.”

“That much.”

Mal knew they were bantering because of the tension in the small shuttle, a stress that had grown since they left Persephone. He felt it himself, an ache in the pit of his belly like something bad was about to happen. “Well, as much as I myself would like to hear about Hank’s adventures with alcohol, it’s show

Comments
Friday, 30 May 2008 17:27
Wow! I like it. Freya is defintely my kind of woman and most assuredly the right type for Mal. I like how you write Zoe. She has that toughness that some tend to water down. Wondeful!!
Saturday, 31 May 2008 03:09
Can't wait to see how this works, or doesn't, work out.
Saturday, 31 May 2008 04:07
Parties and Serenity's crew are usually a bad combination. Waiting eagerly to see how this one goes pear-shaped! :D
Saturday, 31 May 2008 09:14
at least they get a moment to relax! i just know something wicked this way will come...:)
loved all the character touches here - and some nice swift descriptions.
Saturday, 31 May 2008 11:44
Gorramit, I'm as nervous as Mal and Hank are pretending not to be. I'm thinking that feeling Mal had in his gut at the beginnning maybe a foreshadowing of what is to come - gulp. Glad Hank hasn't given in to the urge to gamble. Zoe truly would kill him this time. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 31 May 2008 13:04
Mal shook his head, looking out into the rapidly descending darkness. “Everyone on my crew thinks they have the right to advise me on my love life.”


“Probably because we’d be hard pressed to find us a new captain at this late stage.” He grinned. “Besides, what else is there to do out in the black?”


His current captain glared at him.

Great lines and great snark - gotta love Hank! Looking forward to more.
Thursday, 12 June 2008 00:03
~~~~"Our little psychic assassin twice offered to burn out that part of my brain I use to gamble with.” He shuddered slightly. “Can she do that?”


“I don’t think you want to find out.”


“No.”~~~~~


My favorite bit. I like it when the women folk are all stealthy and crafty and what not. Enjoy it immensely!

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