Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Dancing in the Dark

Thursday, May 22, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Working towards something big, but maybe not quite yet. A little bit more fluff with a little bite, but hopefully not as saccharin as the last piece! The crew, a beach, and music ...

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It was a popular decision. After the near-death experience for Simon and the near-hanging experience for Hank on Newhall, Mal had brought up the possibility at the dinner table, and been nearly overwhelmed by the positive responses.

“That’d be so shiny!” Kaylee enthused.

“Caleb will like it,” River added, rocking her son.

“Get a little swimming in,” Freya considered.

“No fish,” Jayne warned.

“No fish,” Mal promised. “But Hank’s found a small planet that’s got some deserted beaches, not a living soul within fifteen hundred miles, and even if we stayed for twenty-four hours we’d hardly be late at all picking up Badger’s cargo.” He looked at his first mate. “Zoe? You up for it?”

“Sounds good, sir,” adding as she looked at Hank, “Well away from temptation.”

He shouldn’t resent it, he knew that. What with the lying, and the … well, the lying was pretty much the biggest part. And Zoe wasn’t going to let him forget it that easily. Not that he could, not if he wanted to keep his promise this time. “Only temptation will be trying to keep my hands off you,” he said, smiling at her.

She raised an eyebrow at him.

“Shiny,” Mal said, slapping his hands together and rubbing them briskly. “That’s settled, then. Hank, put us on a new heading and get us to relaxing.”

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The planet was everything the pilot had promised, and as Serenity’s ramp lowered, the clean fresh smell of the ocean filled the cargo bay, and suddenly everyone felt a little better.

“No wandering into the forest, though,” Mal ordered, looking more relaxed than he had in a while. “Least, not on your own. We don’t know what’s out there, and it could like young mechanics for dinner.”

Kaylee grinned at him, Hope standing by her feet staring out into the bright light. “The beach is all we want, Captain. Just to relax and soak up a little of the sunshine.”

“I’ve made sure everyone’s got suncream,” Simon said, coming out of the common area. “Here’s yours.” He held out a tube.

“Don’t need that.” Mal shook his

Comments
Thursday, 22 May 2008 17:43
I loved how Mal just wanted Frya to dance and didn't take no for an answer. It was so sweet. I am looking forward to the something big!!

Thursday, 22 May 2008 19:38
Interested to know what's coming, and glad you let Zoe continue to be angry and hurt by Hank's actions. While I love happily-ever-after, the 'verse isn't always like that!
Friday, 23 May 2008 11:32
The sweeter the fluff, the deeper the angst. It's starting to become a conditioned response! Bring it on, then - looking forward to more.
Friday, 23 May 2008 11:49
Brilliant! I loved this change of pace and the crew actually getting some good old fashioned peace and rest in their down time. One tiny thing, you have Mal calling Frey *zhang fu* which is 'husband' when it should be *qizi* for 'wife'. I am getting all worried now though about what it is that Frey can sense coming but cannot see. Might have known the happy good time was going to be short lived (gulp). Loved Jayne's new shorts being one of Wash's cut down shirts and then having the baby in a matching pair. Priceless! Excellent writing as always, love it and lap it up. Ali D :~)
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Monday, 26 May 2008 00:04
The image of Jayne's shorts is fried in my brain. Lovely chapter, even with the ominous undertones.

Monday, 26 May 2008 04:14
Nice little one day vacation. And everyone has their ups and downs, just like life. Well done!

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