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Addiction - Part XVII

Sunday, May 18, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Just rounding off this arc with a little fluff, but the possibility of more angst to come. Hank makes confession, and Mal makes a new friend. CONCLUDING CHAPTER

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It took more than a week before Simon was well enough to be transferred to Serenity, but Dr Paxton finally announced that he could go home, as along as he promised to rest.

“I’ll make sure of that, doc,” Kaylee said firmly, glaring at her husband.

“Hey, what did I do?” the young man demanded to know.

“You shoulda waited. Not said anything until the Cap was there. Then maybe you wouldn’t’ve got pushed out the window.”

“I wasn’t well.”

“That’s no excuse.”

In that time the antiviral had been distributed throughout the town, and everyone on Serenity was feeling a lot better. Monument City wasn’t sure how to handle her crew, though. Simon had undoubtedly saved them from a lot of suffering, maybe even a few lives, but there was still an undercurrent that they were trouble. There was even a rumour that Rita Hammond wouldn’t have died at all if they hadn’t been there.

Macallum had said pretty much the same thing straight out. “So I don’t think it’d be a good idea for you and yours to come back here any time soon.”

Mal smiled. “I take it that job offer ain’t on the table no more.”

“You weren’t going to take it anyway, were you?”

Mal chuckled. “No. Honest truth, we’re better off going from place to place. Never was one for putting down roots dirtside.”

“Safer, too.”

“I’m not sure if I want you to be expanding on that little comment.”

“Like I said before, I look into the people work for me, so probably better not.” Macallum stuck out his hand. “Captain, if you ever need anything, you wave. And I mean it. Anything. Mary’d make me sleep out in the bunkhouse if I didn’t stick to that.”

“She’s done that before?”

“Let’s just say I’ve made an acquaintance of a bedroll or two.”

They laughed and shook hands, then Macallum climbed into his buckboard and flicked the reins, the old vehicle disappearing in a cloud of dust.

Zoe glanced at her captain. “He’s a good man, sir.”

“That he is.”

“You could have taken up his offer. Maybe made this a base for us.”

“Nope

Comments
Sunday, 18 May 2008 23:46
Just had to add that last part, didn't you? *sigh* Lovely ending to this tale, and an ominous beginning to another, if I'm reading correctly! :D
Monday, 19 May 2008 00:06
Poor Mal, he only *thinks* he's Captain. Not nobody on his boat listens to him anyway, not his crew and certainly not his family. And now we have some unnamed person asking after him which can't be good. I am glad that Kuerk had the good sense not to give out more than the barest of information though. Thanks for a wonderful story, I shall look forward as always to the next one. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 19 May 2008 04:07
Leading into the next story and making the ship a zoo...woman after my own heart...love the conclusion.
Monday, 19 May 2008 09:07
plenty of chuckles and smiles here - and don't we (and the characters) need em! nice to end on a truly (firefly) domestic note - you've reached a point where your OC's and their interactions are so fully realised that I feel I'm watching a truly parallel vision of the show:)
Monday, 19 May 2008 15:25
A twisty tale well-told, Jane. Ironically, my husband has suggested that I'm addicted to your Maya 'verse. He's not much in the Jayne mold, fortunately.

I must agree with wytchcroft--I can see each of them ship's denizens in full detail. Now I'm trying to remember if I should know exactly what sinister purpose the nondescript inquirer & co. have in pursuing Simon.
Monday, 26 May 2008 04:03
A very well done story, Jane, from start to finish! A complete turnabout from the last one, which was another turnabout! Excellent work, and a terrific way to keep us guessing, lol.

And a good little 'clue in' for the next arc, as well, just a touch, not too much, just enough to tickle us a bit. Top notch work all around!

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