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The Return - Part 15

Sunday, May 11, 2008

A party is held and goodbyes are made as Serenity prepares to leave Earth.

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The Return – Part 15

“It sounds…unbelievable,” was all the Shepherd could say after Mal told him about their chances of getting home at the exact place and time as they had left their quadrant. Simon and Book had returned late to Serenity, both with duties occupying much of their time away from ship, but they still bunked on board and Kaylee would have it no other way for Simon and neither would Mal for all the crew. Despite their friendship with Will’s gang there were other people in Melbourne who might not be so kind and Mal ordered everyone of his crew back on board ship every night. Will’s people provided armed escorts for moving about the city, especially for Simon, as he was the only fully trained doctor alive on Earth as far as they knew. Now the two men who had been absent from the meeting sat at the dining table eating a late supper as Mal, River, and Kaylee sat with them and tried to explain all Tanya and Gregori had said about time travel.

“It makes the head swim, doesn’t it?” Simon said as he barely lifted a spoonful of soup to his mouth. He was exhausted, Kaylee could see, and she decided to put an end to this meeting so her man could get some rest.

“Time for bed, mister,” she said in a commanding tone and Mal and Book looked at each other with grins.

“My doctor,” was all Simon could mumble as he stood and Kaylee led him away toward her bunk.

“He works too hard,’’ River said after they had left.

“Lots to do,” Mal replied. “And more to do yet. It’s time for getting a rest. I’m gonna lock up the boat.” Mal put his coffee cup in the sink and headed aft, leaving Book and River alone.

“Do you believe, Shepherd?” River asked him and he paused before answering, wondering what she was getting at.

“Believe? I believe in God, if that’s what you are asking. Did we time travel? No, I don’t believe in that. Time is relative to the observer. It does not exist except in our minds as a reference point in order to make our lives more organized. We cannot “time travel” anymore than a pig can

Comments
Sunday, 11 May 2008 15:28
Thanks to all who read this and stayed with it to the end...well, almost the end, because there is more to come. Most of all thanks to those who left comments, especially Amdobell, who has commented on every chapter and always had a kind word, not just for me, but for many other writers out there in the 'verse.

For me writing a fanfic is a way of keeping a show and characters I love alive and in new stories. My take on each character is as close to what the show was like as I can get it and I try to stay as canon as possible. I like a mix of action, romance, and emotion, as this is what the real world is all about. I don't take it seriously and just write what I feel like writing. I do some plotting but mostly I just get an idea and start writing and then the writing takes me where I want to go. I started "The Return" with the notion of having Serenity's crew somehow "return" to Earth and find out what had happened. I knew in the first chapter they would get to Earth and that was it. Everything else came after.

So I hoped you enjoyed it and the next part "The Return Home" will be up and running by sometime next weekend. Stay shiny Browncoats everywhere.
Sunday, 11 May 2008 17:50
This was really good - very well planned and wonderfully written. I haven't read alll the chapters but I will be soon. I loved how you keep all the crew working together as crew. Your OCs fit in very well with the main characters. Loved all the sci fi aspects of this.
Sunday, 11 May 2008 23:14
This was a fabulous journey and I particularly loved how the people left back on earth were left with hope and a new start to look forward to not the doom and gloom they might otherwise have been expecting. It made me smile when they found the Alliance cruiser facing them like the big bad schoolyard bully throwing his weight around, just hope they disconnect and destroy the Kovalev Drive, sure don't want that falling into purplebelly hands. Bravo, can't wait for the sequel series. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 12 May 2008 01:10
Bugger. Nothing ever goes right for these guys does it? Oh well, more fun for us.

I have to say, I loved the Aussies. They were spot on.
Monday, 12 May 2008 02:07
Thanks Blackbeanie for saying I had the Aussies spot on. I tried to make them as authentic as possible. I've had lots of friends from Australia over the years, coming to Korea where I teach English, and I even spent ten days in Sydney once. Great people and always looking for a laugh and a good time. Thanks, mate!
Monday, 12 May 2008 07:00
I've read all the parts of this tale, and although I haven't always commented, I've enjoyed each one. This was great, though. Even the little sidetrack of Jayne and Christine, although I do wonder what River was really getting up to with Dr Philips. As for heading home and finding four years had passed ... well, Einstein wouldn't be surprised! And the big bad Alliance, just waiting for them ... Can't wait for the sequel!

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