Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Addiction - Part IX

Saturday, May 3, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Hank has been accused of murder - will Mal and the crew be able to get him out of jail? NEW CHAPTER

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Mal and Jayne approached the sheriff’s station, hearing the grumblings of the people clustered around getting louder. As they got closer, the words became more distinct.

“Heard tell he cut her up really bad.”

“Mavis said there wasn’t much left, just shreds. Shouldn’t be allowed.”

“Someone told me there was no blood left in the body.”

“Shouldn’t be allowed. Not here in our town.”

“Someone should do something about it.”

“Make sure that monster doesn’t do it again.”

“Shouldn’t be allowed.”

“Shouldn’t be allowed.”

“Shouldn’t be –“

Mal stopped listening. As long as they were still at the ‘shouldn’t be allowed’ stage, Hank was safe. It was when they reached the level of ‘we’re going to do something about it’ that he’d start worrying.

Finally they were at the station, a squat building with high windows, across which a faint glitter announced a high energy forcefield protecting the glass. A look from Mal had Jayne wandering away, as if he had nothing better to do, when in fact he was going to check out the rear of the premises. At least the area in front was clear of people. Not that it mattered. As soon as Mal started for the door all conversation died behind him. He knocked loudly.

“Yeah?” The voice from inside was wary, and probably armed.

“My name’s Malcolm Reynolds,” he said, attempting to sound as unthreatening as possible. “I’m captain of the transport ship Serenity. And I believe you might be holding my pilot.”

“What’s his name?”

“Hank Mills.”

There was a brief discussion inside, none of which Mal could understand, only hearing the dull murmur of voices.

Finally the response came. “Yeah. That’s him.”

Mal pushed the feeling of inevitable dread back down into his stomach. “I want to see him.”

“Not letting you inside.”

“He’s my crew.”

“And you got my sympathies on that fact. But he’s been bound for murder, and that means until the judge sees him, he’s not available.”

“Just for a few minutes. To make sure –“

“I said no.”

Mal swal

Comments
Saturday, 03 May 2008 15:15
Wow, never scorn a Zoe! She is not happy. As for the rest, good stuff. Really good stuff! Wonder what Mal will do now?!
Saturday, 03 May 2008 16:18
Awesome work here. I can only imagine the nightmare Hank is living right now. The best fics ever are the ones that have the crew pulling together for each other, and this one is no exception.
Saturday, 03 May 2008 21:07
I think Zoe's reaction to Hank was spot on and for the gambling part I don't feel sorry for him getting short shrift over it. Not only did he not keep his promise he also lied about it. As for how Mal is going to sort this tangle out I reckon he needs to find someone with a good reason to get rid of Rita. And if they have all those cameras in the jail what about elsewhere? Any in the street perhaps? Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 03 May 2008 22:47
Whew, I can't say more than everyone else. I do have to say I'd likely act like Zoe. Even if he gets out of this, Hank is still in big trouble.
Wednesday, 07 May 2008 10:52
i love Mal's view of the changing verse and its technology - it shows a plausible 'conservative' streak and some of the dizzy feeling life in the verse must have.

oh - sorry, forgot - the story! - oh, y'know...
great.
again.
gorram it.

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