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Addiction - Part VIII

Thursday, May 1, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Back on Serenity, the rest of the crew are blissfully unaware of what's going on in town. NEW CHAPTER

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Zoe turned over, or tried to, then realised she was lying on something other than her own bed. Running through the possibilities – from the hard ground in Serenity Valley to someone else’s bed – she realised the latter was nearer the mark. Especially when small hands touched her face.

“Mama,” Ben said, tapping her cheeks. “Morning.”

“I'm awake, I'm awake,” she said, opening her eyes and smiling at her son.

“Mama.” He grinned back, then coughed loudly, spattering her with tiny droplets. “Sorry,” he mumbled.

“Well, if I don’t get it now I’ll be surprised.” She sat up on the cot as she wiped herself down and pulled Ben onto her lap. “How’re you feeling today?” she asked, running her hand across his forehead.

He made a face. “Icky.”

It was a word Bethie had been using whenever anyone asked how she was, and she could see he meant it. His skin was flushed and hot, and she could hear his chest was rolling with every breath. “I think we’d better get the doc to take a look at you.”

“’Kay.” He rubbed his nose with the back of his hand.

“I'm here,” Simon said, stepping into the shuttle, his medical bag in his hand. “Is Ben feeling worse?”

“I think his temperature’s higher.”

“Well, let’s see what we can do about that, shall we?” He smiled, sat down on the edge of the cot and pulled out his stethoscope, moving the little boy’s pyjamas up so he could listen to his chest.

Ben studied him, watching every move. “Uncle Simon?” he asked carefully, pointing to the stethoscope. “Wanna play.”

“In a minute, Ben.” Simon was listening intently, moving the business end to different places, then Ben coughed again and he winced. Pulling the earpieces away he looked at Zoe. “He’s congested, but I can give him something to help that.” He took a small bottle out of his bag and measured a single dose. “Ben, you have to drink this.”

The little boy screwed up his face in disgust, but opened his mouth, and as Simon poured the liquid inside he took advantage of the opportunity and

Comments
Thursday, 01 May 2008 17:50
Oh NO!!! not another of Zoe's husbands!!

I am really enjoying this story. I have been chasing through your library and have found that this is an extraordinary world. The characters are so well written. I am very much looking forward to more.
Thursday, 01 May 2008 19:00
I can't imagine how this si going to work out. Hank still needs a beating in my opinion. I hope Zoe gives it to him. Or threatens to leave him there and let god sort it out. I'd be enraged if I were her, the killing kind.
You make it so real, the characters are so well drawn. I really enjoy your stories.

Joanna
Thursday, 01 May 2008 23:41
On top of all the crew worrying about everyone getting sick Hank has to go and get himself into the worst kind of trouble. Doesn't matter that he didn't kill anyone, his own stupid addiction to gambling put him in the wrong place at the wrong time. If the lynch mob don't kill him I'm thinking Zoe will. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 02 May 2008 03:12
Whew,you really have the crew in a pickle don't you? I don't have any idea how you are going to get Hank out of this.
Friday, 02 May 2008 08:48
a very fair merry go ride:) the spin you put your characters in!
Saturday, 03 May 2008 00:10
Yikes!
Saturday, 03 May 2008 06:52
And I guess Jayne will get the blame for all this, lol. I gotta say, Jane, you're cranking up the amps on this on! And the way you build the tension is absolutely terrific. I had envisioned Hank gambling the title to Serenity or something, but nothing like this.

Well done!
Saturday, 03 May 2008 14:19
Wow what a mess. Just when things in your plots couldn't get worse, they do. How do you do that? Great work as always!

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