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Addiction - Part VI

Monday, April 28, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal meets Stewart Macallum and Jayne talks to Simon about Hank. Okay, I know I'm just teasing you. But you like it. NEW CHAPTER

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Stewart Macallum was in his late sixties with a shock of white hair brushed back from a wise, weather-beaten-into-submission face. Taller than Mal by an inch, he was broadshouldered and fit, wearing his long black duster coat like a badge of office. As he climbed alone from the front seat of the buckboard, Mal walked down the ramp to join his first mate.

“Sir? Any news?” she breathed, not taking her eyes off the man in front.

“Jayne just called. Simon’s made a deal. Be a day or two, but we‘re getting the antiviral.”

Zoe wasn’t one to leap up and down or even get emotional, not when they were on the job, but he could feel her relax, just a little. “That’s good, sir.”

“Surely is.”

“Captain Reynolds?” Macallum stepped forward, pulling off heavy leather gloves.

“That’s me.” Mal stepped forward. “You’ll be Macallum.”

“That I will.” There was a faint accent in the man’s voice, a burr that spoke of a place a long way from Newhall. They shook hands, each taking a moment to judge the other. “My goods intact?”

“All here.” Mal nodded over his shoulder. “Kinda filled my ship.”

“It’s my wife’s fault.” Macallum smiled suddenly, the lines on his cheeks merging. “She likes to buy, and I like to indulge.”

“Got one of my own,” Mal agreed.

“Then you’ll know how it is.” His eyes lit on Zoe. “And is this her?”

“No. This is Zoe. My right hand.”

The older man‘s eyes raked up and down Zoe‘s form, but in an almost benevolent fashion. “I’m thinking this one keeps you on your toes too, right?”

“Since I was wet behind the ears.”

For a long moment Macallum seemed be considering them both, then he must have liked what he saw, because he slapped his gloves in the palm of his hand and said, “Captain, would you have a glass handy? I’ve brought a fine bottle of sipping whiskey with me, and I hate to drink alone.”

Mal raised one eyebrow. “Shouldn’t we get your cargo unloaded first?”

“Mary’s waited near a month for that piano – she can wait an hour longer.”

“Piano?”

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Comments
Monday, 28 April 2008 20:22
“Aye, that’s in the big crate. At least, that’s what I’m hoping. A baby grand.” Mal must have looked baffled, because Macallum laughed and slapped him on the back. “It’s a mite bigger’n the uprights you and I are used to, Captain, but it’s just a joanna by a fancy name.”

Tickled me a bit. I'm ready for more, you prolific thing, you.

Joanna
Monday, 28 April 2008 21:20
This is just so good. Very impressive!
Monday, 28 April 2008 21:31
I don't think I would have told Macullum about Simon helping their doc get the machine working to make the antiviral and I'm not that happy that he has his men and a container round the corner ready to collect his goods once he has made up his mind about Mal. Drinking whiskey and chatting like that seems more a way to disarm the Captain and put folk at their ease before he tries something, at least I am hoping I am wrong about that. It would be great if Macallumin is the nice old man he appears to be. Just not holding my breath. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 28 April 2008 21:34
I muast add this. I love your character depth. It's a challenge to add new characters to a world already created and you do it so flawessly. I am very impressed.
Monday, 28 April 2008 23:47
This is really good stuff, Jane. After the last 'adventure' you've dialed down the action but upped the ante on the drama amongst the crew. A great switch in tempo, which is what makes you one of the best fanfic writers out there. And I agree, the character depth is just awesome.

Joss should definitely get you to write a Firefly novel! I'd buy it in a minute!

Bad
Friday, 02 May 2008 23:48
Why am I filled with an uncomfortableness about this? Oh, that's right. Because I've read your stuff! LOL
WOONSOCKET
Wednesday, 05 November 2008 21:04
Excellent definition of a home. :)

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