Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Carrying His Bullet

Monday, April 21, 2008

This is an idea that I had been playing with for some time. If I get a good response, I may continue with chapters. if not, I hope you enjoy it for what it's worth.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 4063    RATING: 8.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

Tweet

Carrying His Bullet

--------------------------

based on the world of Firefly by Joss Whedon

"Heard you were hunting him again? Maybe finish what you started." the elderly man smiled as he placed another gun on the table wiping it clean. The shadows covering the addressed.

"You could say that."

"You realize it's been almost ten years since you saw him last and if I remember, it didn't end well." He watched as the pistol disappeared under a dark brown coat.

"It could've ended better, but things came up and with them, came circumstances beyond our control."

"You think he'll want you strolling into his life again. I do believe you were the one who strolled out."

"Nope, but as I see it, I never quite gave him a chance to say goodbye. Every man deserves to at least have that chance."

"True, but the Alliance will be following."

"Aren't they always?" He heard the distinct sound of a chamber spinning.

"He has a woman."

"So I've heard. Companion or such...Typical of him."

"You broke him heart. Did you expect him to wait?"

"The female part of me, maybe."

"What if he doesn't even recognize you?"

"Mal will." The young woman finally emerging from the shadows, a head of long red hair playing with the light as cold emerald eyes seemed to glisten. "You never forget the person who carries your bullet."

Comments
Monday, 21 April 2008 14:58
My first real fanfic...I hope to add flashbacks to story if it pans out.
Monday, 21 April 2008 16:23
Definately worth adding to I think.

gentle journey,
twi
Monday, 21 April 2008 16:49
*cocks eyebrow* You have my attention. I'd love to read more.
Tuesday, 22 April 2008 04:31
You have my attention too.
Monday, 28 April 2008 20:16
Well, I'm getting startd on your 'library'. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Joanna
Thursday, 08 May 2008 01:22
I liked it, and i'm really interested to see where this takes us.

I would recomend though. having check it for spelling, grammar, and such. There were a couple sentences that couldve used edditing.

but I Liked it!!!!
Tuesday, 14 July 2009 22:28
Wow!

Post Your Comments

You must log in to post comments.