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Ordinary Day - Part XII

Monday, April 7, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. The crew are awake, but not in control. Simon decides the best way to save them is to betray them. NEW CHAPTER

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Ethan sighed in relief. “Mama’s awake. So’s Daddy.”

Jesse didn’t really understand, but she knew her brother wasn’t so taut with fear anymore. She put her thumb in her mouth and began to suck loudly. She was hungry, and thirsty too, but it looked like neither appetite were likely to be satisfied in the near future. “Mama,” she mumbled.

Then Ethan jerked, his eyes widening. “Daddy.”

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“Give me a hand, Burkett,” Cody said, leaning down and getting his hands under Mal’s arms, and between them they dragged Mal to his feet. “Come on,” he added. “You’ve got an appointment to keep.”

“I think my diary’s pretty full,” Mal said, his muscles complaining from being in the same position for so long. “But I think I can fit you in next Tuesday, if you wanna come back.”

“Do you always crack inappropriate jokes at times like this?” Prater asked.

“It’s one of my more endearing traits.” Mal glanced at Freya, seeing so much worry in her face that he didn’t need to read it in his mind. “Ain’t that so, honey?”

“Along with leaving your socks on the table,” she agreed, her voice hardly quavering at all.

“Niska thought the same,” Mal went on. “Not about the socks, of course, but my surprising wit. Although he had a more direct approach. He just wanted to kill me.”

“I’m not surprised,” Prater said. “Get him into the infirmary,” he added to Cody.

The young man nodded. “Don’t worry, I’ll cut that wit out of you,” he promised. “I have a few tricks of my own, if the boss runs out. And I just know I can get you to talk.” He grinned, his youthful features open and happy, almost as if he was discussing who he was going to take to the local dance, and not about torturing someone. “Although it’s much more fun if you don’t. At least for a while.”

Chur ni duh ,” Mal said pleasantly in return.

Cody jabbed his fist into Mal’s belly, and he slid to his knees, unable to breathe.

“Stop!” Freya shouted, her voice drowned among the others protesting.

Prater fired his gun into

Comments
KIMBO
Monday, 07 April 2008 15:37
Little do they know that river can kill them with her brain.

Great chapter more soon i hope :)
MELLIEMEL
Monday, 07 April 2008 16:28
I'm not the only one who smiled when they picked River
Monday, 07 April 2008 19:03
Thinks our favorite Captain must be related to Br'er Rabbit..."Pleaseeeee Br're Fox don't throw me in dat briar patchhhhhhh"...and yes Mellie...I smiled right hugely when the bad man decided to take poor tiny defenceless River......laughs harder and waits for the next chapter.....
Monday, 07 April 2008 20:17
Ooh, this is so good I cheered when I saw you had another chapter up! For one horrifying minute I thought Ethan was going to give away his and Jesse's hiding place went he went to get her some water. And priceless them taking River with Mal, nice bit of quick thinking on Simon's part too. I feel a Temple of Doom moment coming on! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 07 April 2008 23:26
Just glad Prater doesn't know that he picked the psychic, Alliance trained assasian and new mother. Of them all, I think the mother part of River may be the most dangerous.
Tuesday, 08 April 2008 12:36
This just keeps getting better and better! Quick thinking on Simon's part - knew he'd always make a great criminal mastermind - if only for humanitarian reasons. Always love when you put River and Mal together - you bring out a side of their relationship that is always very special.
Sunday, 13 April 2008 18:38
You know how I love Mal and River together, so this chapter is just 10 kinds of shiny!
Thursday, 27 May 2010 15:08
AAAHhhh and they choose River

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