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Ordinary Day - Part V

Monday, March 24, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Inside the temple, Mal, Zoe and Jayne find what they were looking for, but there's worries back on board Serenity. NEW CHAPTER

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At Zoe’s voice Mal turned to see a section of the wall had moved to one side, revealing a darkness beyond that had a feeling of age about it. He removed his hand from the knob, but immediately the wall began to close, only reopening as he pressed down again.

“Great,” he murmured. “Jayne, see if you can find something to wedge this with.”

“That’s not a good idea,” Zoe put in quickly. “If it slides, comes loose somehow, we’d be trapped.”

Mal felt a slow-burning anger in his belly. “But that means one of us has to stay behind.”

No, it don’t, ” Hank said over the ear-pieces. “ That’s not the way in. In fact, if you went that way, you’d end up at the bottom of a very deep pit. With spikes.

Jayne shuddered. “Then what -”

Just inside the entrance there should be a carving on the wall. You need to tell me what it looks like.

“Zoe,” Mal commanded, holding down the protuberance.

She stepped gingerly inside the tunnel, shining her torch on the wall. Nothing to her left. She turned. “Got it,” she said.

What’s it look like, sweetie?

“It’s a picture of a man, wearing … actually, very little.” She moved the light a little. “Anatomically correct, if somewhat exaggerated.”

What’s he holding?

“A trident. Only it isn’t. It’s got four points, not three.” She touched it gingerly. “And it’s actually made out of metal, attached to the wall somehow.”

You need to turn it through ninety degrees. Can you do that?

“I’ll try.” She felt around the metalwork, and realised it was set on a spindle through its centre. Using one finger, she turned it, like adjusting the hour hand on a clock, until it was upside down. There was a click from somewhere deep in the darkness. “Okay,” she said, releasing the breath she hadn’t known she was holding. “Now what?”

That’s my girl, “ Hank said approvingly. “ Now what’s in his other hand?

“A net. It’s got five fishes in it.”

You sure it’s five? Not four?

“Pos

Comments
Monday, 24 March 2008 23:17
Mal as Indiana Jones, I like it!
Monday, 24 March 2008 23:35
Indiana Reynolds and crew on the hunt! This is so cool. Really outdoing yourself here Jane!
Tuesday, 25 March 2008 00:55
Uh oh, Hank going silent on them makes me worry that the gorram way in has somehow closed behind them and sealed them in. Also, all kinds of worried that River and Bethie were getting odd feelings they couldn't pinpoint. Why is it the warnings always come too late? I'm kind of waiting for a big old round rock to come rolling down the passage Mal and company went through to block them in or squash them. (Gulp) - Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Tuesday, 25 March 2008 03:22
Indiana Reynolds...I like that Badkarma00.

And the story too, Jane.
Tuesday, 25 March 2008 12:34
Why can't anything ever go smooth? Great story - and another cliffhanger!
Wednesday, 26 March 2008 03:45
This situation fills me with an uncomfortableness, to quote my favorite mercenary! :D

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