Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Naming of Parts

Saturday, March 15, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Sort of an epilogue to FIXED, Mal is cleaning his guns late at night and has a visitor.

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It was late, and most of the rest of the crew had adjourned to their various bunks and beds, although the lights hadn’t been turned to night mode as yet. It was quiet enough, though, for Mal to hear all the little creaks and groans his ship made occasionally as she moved smoothly through the black, with the occasional murmur of voices and laughter filtering up, probably talking about their visit to Lazarus.

He had his gun cleaning kit laid out on the dining room table, the only place – as he’d had cause to note on more than one occasion – big enough. He didn’t have as many as Jayne, of course, but there were enough that it took a while to get them just right. He didn’t want to have them misfiring on him just when he needed them most, particularly not with Theo‘s words still buzzing round his mind, words of revolution and rebellion …

Sliding the magazine from his favourite handgun, the one that hung at his hip more often than not, he took it apart easily, the action second nature to him. Picking up the small brush, he began to clean the barrel of any tiny carbon particles that might be adhering to the metal.

He never used to do this quite so late at night, but with all the kids on board he’d found it harder to find time to do the simple things, like keeping his weapons in order, without little hands grabbing at stuff they shouldn’t. Easier to be able to concentrate when he knew they were all in bed.

“What are you doing?”

Mal’s heart jumped and he let out a yell, grabbing at the barrel before it could leap from his fingers and clatter to the floor. Maybe he’d been concentrating just a little too hard.

“Ethan, what are you doing up?” he asked, taking a calming breath.

The little boy looked at him with his head on one side. “Jesse’s wakeful,” he explained, holding his knitted alligator to his dinosaur pyjama-clad chest. “Mama’s tending to her.”

“So that means you can wander the ship this time of night?” Mal tried to look severe. “You should be asleep.”

“I was.” He twisted the hea

Comments
Saturday, 15 March 2008 02:30

I sniffled just a little at the end. Loved the father/son bonding.

What Mal needs to do a little later is to tell Ethan the stories behind the guns.
Saturday, 15 March 2008 03:04
Touching and bittersweet. A perfect capper for the last story arc. The backstory with Mal and his own dad made it even more poignant, and the loss of innocence more up front and personal.
Saturday, 15 March 2008 04:11
Beautifully bittersweet! I love the father/son bonding too, but hope Ethan doesn't need to use one soon either.
Saturday, 15 March 2008 17:25
That was a sweet little story. I've missed a couple of yours because of work but looking to catch up this week. As always this was great
Saturday, 15 March 2008 18:38
What a bitter reality of the 'verse in which they live that Mal must teach his son about guns. But who better to do it than our favorite Captain! Well done.
Sunday, 16 March 2008 22:51
I can so imagine a conversation like this happening but I can see Mal having a quiet word with Jayne at some point, not that it will change a gorram thing. Ali D
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