Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Fixed - Part IV

Tuesday, March 4, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Still fluffy. Mal and Ethan spend some quality time together. NEW CHAPTER

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“Daddy!” Ethan ran up to his father, a handful of late flowers clutched in one little fist. “For Mama,” he said proudly, handing them over.

Mal looked at them. “Shouldn’t you be giving these to your Ma yourself?”

“Later.” He grinned and scampered off again.

Mal looked at the little posy and shook his head, smiling ruefully as he tucked them into his shirt. They were likely to be limp by the time they got back to the house, but he knew Freya would treat them like the biggest and most expensive bouquet she’d ever received, probably pressing one or two of the petals in the journal she kept, and her son would love her even more.

Not that it was hard to love her. Not in the slightest. It only took one look at her, her short brown hair (even if one or two were starting to turn silver), those hazel eyes that read his thoughts off the back of his skull, the tattoo flaming up her back … he just had to see her to want to love her. Which he’d proved the night before when he walked in on her taking her bath.

She was floating in the delicately scented water, her eyes closed. She knew he was there, of course, and her lips twitched as his gaze ran down her naked body. The scars ghosting across her skin were now merely shadows, echoes of what had been, and if she was slightly softer from carrying two children, it was the kind of softness that pulled at his soul, made his heart beat faster, and took blood away from his senses to a far more responsive organ altogether.

“You gonna stand there all night and watch me?” she asked, still not looking at him, the words echoing in his mind as much as in his ears.

“Not sure,” he said. “The view’s pretty breathtaking. Might be considering seeing if I can capture it on paper. You know, for posterity.”

“Could make a fortune.”

“Could at that.”

“Your very own Mona Lisa.”

“Mona who?”

There was a pause. “Water’s just right.”

“It looks it.”

“And I’m comfy.” Now she opened her eyes, gazing into his blue orbs. “So why don’t you join me?”

Comments
Tuesday, 04 March 2008 21:22
Nobody does fluff quite like you! Hope this made you smile too. Thanks for the happy morning scene.
Tuesday, 04 March 2008 23:01
Oh to be a clump of mud that gets thrown on Inara! Or better yet, Kaylee. Or best of all RIVER! I just looooove River! ROFL

This was a great chapter, fluffy, with a tinge of tension that sort of washed away. And left a muddy hand print to boot.

I just have this awful feeling that things will go in the crapper, though. You're setting us up, aren't you? I know you are. Admit it.

Great chapter, Jane. I loved it.
Wednesday, 05 March 2008 01:38
Brilliant! I particularly loved the image you drew in my head of a mini-Mal with Ethan standing with his thumbs tucked in his suspenders and head tilted to one side as he looked at his father. Hmm, adorable. And I loved Simon's comment about Jayne eating enough bacon to wipe out all the pigs on the planet! Nope, don't think he'll be dying soon either. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 06 March 2008 02:37
Thanks, Jane. Now my inner child wants to go play in the mud!... Not that I blame her, though. It's just that it's still a bit too cool to do that. ;)
Thursday, 06 March 2008 12:22
Coming late to the party, but glad I got here! What fun!
Wednesday, 09 July 2008 13:41
I laughed out loud! Mal and Ethan and then Inara! I mean Inara in the mud!! It was amazing. I wish Freya hadn't gotten jealous though... you would think by now she would just relax. Oh well. Wonderful story!

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