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Broken - Part XI

Sunday, February 24, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. River's giving birth. CONCLUDING CHAPTER - for the moment

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There was a cupboard on board Serenity where stuff was put. Just stuff. Like when it was broken but maybe someone thought it was too good to be just thrown out with the garbage, or if someone figured maybe it could be fixed one day, then it was put into the cupboard. There was a small Cortex screen Kaylee had always intended to mend so she could put it in Bethie’s room, half a dozen out of date ration packs, a ball of string made up of lots of oddments, kept just in case. There was even one of Wash’s old dinosaurs, sans head. And right now, as the rain pounded down onto the hull of the Firefly, it also contained a psychic, pressed in under the shelves.

“Broken,” River said. “I can’t be fixed but too precious to throw away.”

Simon crouched down. “ Mei-mei , you have to come out. You’re in labour.”

“I disagree.”

Simon sat down, taking the strain off his calf muscles. “It doesn’t matter whether you agree or not. It’s a plain fact.” He could feel a crick starting in his neck from the unnatural position. “At least let me scan you.”

River squirmed further back into the cupboard, clutching the headless dinosaur. “Not coming out. Want to cut into me. Cut me open. Take him.”

“No-one’s going to take your baby.” He tried to sound calming.

“They do.” She glanced down at her hands.

He understood. “Then we’ll stop them. Like we always do. Mal, Zoe, Freya, Hank ... we’ll all stop them taking your baby.” He tried again. “River, I do need to scan you. If you’d just come to the infirmary –”

“No.”

He took a deep breath. “All right, then how about …” He looked around to see Bethie holding out his portable scanner. “Thank you, sweetheart.” He smiled at his daughter.

“You’re welcome, Daddy.”

“You’d better go back and look after the others, don’t you think?”

“Jesse’s hungry,” the little girl admitted.

“I expect you are too.”

“Little bit.” She rolled her foot. “Can I go find us something to eat?”

“Of course. But nothing you have to use the stove for. Or

Comments
Sunday, 24 February 2008 17:39
Welcome to the 'verse, Caleb Cobb! :D
Sunday, 24 February 2008 17:46
“How much longer, doc?”
“A little while yet, Jayne.”
“Only we’re runnin’ out of wool here.”

What a wonderful way to carry a joke! This was great on all accounts, but your humor was first rate in this. Loved the Hank/Zoe interplay. The innuendos about death before impending fatherhood were perfect! Looking forward to more - and wondering what's going to happen to poor Sully.
Sunday, 24 February 2008 20:47
“Ain’t gonna kill him today, Zoe,” Jayne promised.

Jayne's only got eyes for his progeny today, and not even Hank can spoil it.

Wow, Jane, the best chapter of the arc and that's saying something as it was all great! And finally the little Cobblet. What a very cool story!

THis is just outstanding. One of my favorite all time stories. Loved River's line; "Can't be fixed but too precious to throw away"

I don't know what I can add, except to say Well done! Well done!
Sunday, 24 February 2008 22:39
All my favourite lines have already been quoted so it only remains for me to say I loved it! Such a nice change to have a whole chapter without imminent death or torture in it. And I loved the sweet little scene with Mal, Frey and all the kids. A moment of peace. I'm also thinking River is like to end up a champion knitter! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 04 November 2009 17:17
(sniff), (tear), Smile.. continue reading.. :)

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