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Broken - Part IX

Friday, February 22, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal has a plan, and so does Hank. NEW CHAPTER

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“Reynolds!” The man outside was getting louder. “You took that cargo out from under us on Bernadette, and Sullivan owes me. You’re gonna give it back and the money he paid you. I think that’s fair.”

“Is this to do with you?” Corcoran asked.

Mal tried to look reasonable although his heart was sinking. “Let’s just say I was involved, though it ain't exactly my problem.” But it’s sure as hell gonna be Sully’s when I catch up with him , he thought.

“Oh, but it is.” The man lifted his gun again. “And it could just be a permanent problem if me or my men get hurt in the crossfire.”

“And that should worry me … how?” Mal almost laughed. “You were just about to shoot me. You think I'm gonna be concerned about your health?”

“Mal …” Jayne ground out, and even Zoe winced internally. Mal’s overconfidence seemed to be back.

“Talk to them,” Corcoran ordered.

“What?” Mal’s eyebrows went up.

“Talk to them.”

“And tell them what, exactly?”

“I don’t care. Make a deal if you have to.”

“You gonna keep it?”

Corcoran gave him a withering look. “Sure I am.”

Mal walked towards the door, stopped by Baxter while he was still six feet away.

“Close enough,” the man said, his gun pointing squarely at Mal’s chest.

“I wasn't intending to make a run for it.”

He poked Mal hard with the barrel of his rifle, enough to bruise. “It’s still close enough.”

-

“Lie still,” Simon ordered.

“I have to be doing something.” Freya was struggling to sit up on the medbed.

“You’ve been shot. That makes me in charge.”

She paused and glared at him. “You think?”

“It does down here.” He pressed on the wound in her shoulder and she gasped. “See?”

“Sadist.”

“That’s right. Insult the man who’s trying to save your life.”

“I'm not dying.”

“Don’t tempt me.”

She took a calming breath. “Simon, we’ve got bad guys outside, and Mal’s … I can’t afford to lie here.”

“Fine.” He’d had enough. “So go ahead,” he said, stepping back.

“What?”

“Bleed to death. See if

Comments
Friday, 22 February 2008 09:35
Loved Jayne's *plan* to start arguing with Mal giving Zoe the chance to get to the mule then taking out the bad guys. One group of stupod *tamade hundan* down, one last group to go. And not only is there the tension of Hank's efforts to electrocute the enemy perhaps backfiring and frying everyone on Serenity it looks like River is going into labour and Freya has pushed herself too much too early after the little bit of stitching she let Simon do to keep her innards on the inside. Boy, what else can happen? Exciting stuff and nice to see Jayne being all Heroic. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 22 February 2008 09:36
Ooops, I meant stupid not stopod. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Friday, 22 February 2008 13:49
This was great fun again! The powerplay inside the warehouse, outside the warehouse, between Freya and Simon, Freya and Hank and Kaylee, and River and the baby - all trying to gain control over a situation out of control. Even the weather's out of control and the port authority is in too much control. Do I sense a theme here? May want to fix your title though.
Friday, 22 February 2008 13:52
Just got caught up on this story. Exciting stuff as always.
Friday, 22 February 2008 13:55
Katesfriend - yes, sorry about the title. I'd just uploaded, noticed I'd mispelled, went back to change it and my connection crashed! Only just able to get back in ...
Friday, 22 February 2008 13:57
Cool way to dispatch Cocoran. Coccoran? Anyway, that guy. Wonder what River's up to though. And if the spike got her. And the bad guys. You're definitly gonna be gettin' the "Baddie" award for tension on this one. And people say that 'I' like cliffhangers? ROFL

Great as always Jane. Great as always.
Friday, 22 February 2008 13:58
OH, and I've decided that Mal and Freya deserve each other. Can there be two more stubborn people in the entire 'verse?
MERRYWYN
Friday, 22 February 2008 16:10
Loved this, as always...just one question...where's Jesse?
Saturday, 23 February 2008 01:16
“Well, ain’t life a bitch?”

“You have no idea.”

That about sums it all up! LOL :D

Saturday, 23 February 2008 13:05
very well handled both action - and reactions

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