Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Broken - Part VI

Sunday, February 17, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Jayne finds something that helps River, but there's more trouble brewing. NEW CHAPTER

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3596    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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The three day trip to Argus went as well as could be expected, especially as most of the crew spent the time keeping metal utensils out of River’s way at the same time as trying to come up with various small, repetitive tasks she could perform. It seemed to work, as she sorted the odds and ends in a box Hank found which had been long forgotten in the cargo bay, undid the tangle of string Freya provided, and she even went through all the seeds she’d collected and was going to plant once she could tend her garden again. She seemed more centred, more relaxed.

The most surprising and effective task, however, was one dreamed up by Jayne.

The morning of the second day everyone sat down to breakfast of protein bars and coffee - it being Hank’s turn to cook, and these were the things least likely to cause a fire - and chatted amongst themselves, talking of mundane things such as how they intended to spend the day, whether Freya was going to be able to help Kaylee or teach lessons, and how they were going to spend the money due them from the delivery on Argus. River seemed to be listening, but her hand edged towards the salt even as Jayne dropped his large one on top.

“River,” he said softly. “Ya don’t want that. Eat your breakfast.”

“Not hungry,” she demurred, still gazing at the salt pot. “Don’t want it to consume.”

Mal glanced at Jayne, wondering if they were going to have to watch River counting out the tiny grains of salt, one at a time, but the big man shook his head slightly.

“Got something for ya better’n that,” he said. Getting to his feet he crossed to the cupboards behind the counter, opening the top one that held his bottle of booze out of the way of tiny, prying fingers, and reached inside. When he turned around he had a small bundle in his hand, which he placed in front of his young wife. “Here. Made this for ya.”

River touched it with awe, eventually unwrapping it as he took his place back next to her.

Everyone else watched as the contents were revealed.

“Knitting needle

Comments
Sunday, 17 February 2008 02:43
Looks good to me! Oh and suspense now, too. Nice job:)
Sunday, 17 February 2008 03:11
If this is what writer's block does to you, you worry too much. This was fun! I loved how everyone got to contribute, even Wash. And Jayne admitting he was provoking Simon was perfect. And of course now WE all have something more to worry about with the beacon, thank you very much!
Sunday, 17 February 2008 03:37
Knitting was a stroke of genius on Jayne's part. There is more to him than guns.

If this is writers block I must have writer's paralysis the times absolutely nothing comes out/
Sunday, 17 February 2008 10:17
Loved this to bits and I loved how knitting suddenly became a manly thing to do. I could easily imagine Jayne knowing how to it, his ma showing him and Mattie seeming so natural what with the obvious love his has for his ma and the things she likes to knit him. Pure genius on his part to think of teaching River and using wool from Simon's jumper was priceless! I laughed so hard my tummy ached. But oh, then Freya sleepwalking and instinctively knowing that what was bothering her was in one of those crates. And the worst part being she is sleepwalking so can't warn anyone and most likely won't remember a bit of it in the morning. Not sure I'll be able to sleep for worry after this! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 17 February 2008 17:20
Ah, so now we come to the real crux of the matter! Why, oh why can things never go smooth?! LOL
Monday, 18 February 2008 10:00
your characters may drop stitches - you so rarely do. and i agree, jayne knitting - i can SEE it absolutely!:)

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