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Need to Leave (Aftermath Part 4)

Monday, June 23, 2003

You'd think a little passenger pick up on a nothin' moon would be simple. Nothin' ever goes smooth.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3148    RATING: 8.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Disclaimer: As it ever was and always will be, this little universe belongs to Mr. Whedon, and whoever else is on the contract. I'm just visiting and having heaps o' fun.

My apologies for the time it has taken me to get this up here. I do hope y'all are enjoying the story. The next part should be the last. Ah-ha, but the last for who?

Harmony was, indeed, very much like Fairfield and hundreds of other planets and moons. So many of them had been terra-formed to be dull, unprosperous little worlds. In most cases, it would take many generations for them to be any kind of pleasant. No threat to the alliance. A little after midday, Serenity approached to land in the nearest clearing to the small town. It was on a low hill some distance north of the cluster of buildings.

Mal stood on the bridge behind Wash as the ship turned toward the landing area on a low hill. Zoe, standing next to him, leaned forward to see a small group of men waiting on the edge of the landing area. “Looks like we have a reception committee, Sir.”

“Yep. I just hope Miss Adel and her kids are ready to go.”

“Is there a problem, Sir? We’re not in any hurry, are we?”

“No, no problem. Anxious to be gone is all. Wash, keep an eye out for other ships.”

Wash looked askance. “Expectin’ someone?”

“No, just don’t want to be caught with our pants down.” He picked up a couple of earbud transceivers, and handed one to Zoe before starting down the stairs between the pilots’ seats. He stopped halfway. “Anything happens, let me know.”

“Sir?” Zoe raised her eyebrows.

“Anything.” He disappeared as the pilot and first mate exchanged puzzled expressions.

Wash looked up in supplication. “Wu de ma.”

Down in the passenger quarters, Simon stood at his sister’s door. “River, honey, it’s okay to come out. It’s a very nice day. We can go for a walk in the sun.”

“No. Can’t stay. Need to leave.” Her voice came high and quavering through the door. She was clearly frightened.

“We won’t go far. Just outsi

Comments
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 23 June 2003 02:54
BC

Angst, angst, angst all over the place. And I'm with Jayne. Are the Reavers following them?
LJC
Monday, 23 June 2003 03:12
Loving this so far! Can't wait to see how it all turns out!
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 23 June 2003 04:55
Such excitement and drama. Love it. :)
ANONYMOUS
Monday, 23 June 2003 16:46
This is really good, and still in character. I felt that it was needed to further the story, and I'm left waiting and wondering what will happen next. I hope that since the ride will take five days to return that the next story will not focus soley on the people on the planet because I think that everyone on board deserves to have their reactions heard. Also, keep going with the Mal/Inara and Mal/River interaction. I love how you've portrayed both in the past and I'm eager for more. I'm a huge M/R shipper (don't ask) but since not too many people like them, I always have to settle for their father/daughter moments in people's fic. Yours have been some of the best.
Thursday, 26 June 2003 16:13
Ok wantmore. I do I do. Don't keep us waiting too long dong ma?
Thursday, 26 June 2003 16:13
Ok wantmore. I do I do. Don't keep us waiting too long dong ma?
Sunday, 29 June 2003 22:46
Love it

I am a fan of your Mal / River interaction as well.

And who is in command at the moment?

Zoe or Wash ?

Reminds me of a line from Apocaylse Now

" It may have been my mission, but it sure as shit was the chiefs boat "

Not that I see any conflict with this, I think Zoe and Wash as a tandem works great, just saying.

MCK
Friday, 28 April 2006 22:26
Wow this is a great story you've got here. Believable tension and drama with all the characters showing their unique and wonderful traits. I love that Mal is being left behind. Anytime that happens and Zoe is in charge angsty fun ensues.
Keep it up.

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