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Slender Thread - Part XII: Epilogue

Wednesday, February 6, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. The danger is over for the Firefly, but Mal doesn't want to leave it at that. FINAL CHAPTER OF THIS ARC

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A Firefly didn’t carry weapons. Transport ships rarely did, in case it attracted scavengers and pirates. It was something certain lower levels of society thought humorous, but ship’s captains were a superstitious lot, even if they never admitted to it. Mostly they considered that if they couldn’t run from danger, or at least talk their way out of it, having a big gun attached to the front of the boat was just asking for trouble.

In this instance, though, Mal almost wished he had something huge to take out the ship hanging darkly in front of them.

“You sure this is gonna work?” he asked Kaylee for the eighteenth time.

“Positive,” she said, looking up from where she was making the final adjustments to the timing mechanism.

“And it ain't gonna be able to take it over? Turn it back on us?”

She shook her head. “That’s why this is mechanical. No electronic parts at all.” She stood up. “Kinda feels old fashioned, but that’s worked for us before.”

“Okay,” he said, still not quite believing her.

She grinned. “Cap’n, these barrels are full of V59.” She patted one of the metal containers, trying not to laugh when he winced visibly. “Mix it right with the catalyst and it makes a pretty bang.”

“So Dillon said.”

“I'm surprised he could get his hands on it, and so much,” Kaylee mused. “Being as how he’s such a law-abiding person ‘n’all.”

“I’ll have to tell Dillon that you said that,” Freya laughed, coming out of the common area towards them, Jesse sitting on her hip. “He’d love to know someone called him law-abiding.”

“You mean he ain’t?” Kaylee feigned shock. “And him that little girl’s godfather at that.”

“There are tales in Dillon’s past that would take your breath away.” She smiled as she remembered. “And definitely outdo any of Hank’s books.” She sighed. “Ah, happy days.”

Mal snorted. “You keep saying that, but you never tell me any.”

“I'm keeping them for when we’re old and grey and need something new to talk about.”

“You mean like next week?”

Her smile w

Comments
Wednesday, 06 February 2008 13:54
Lovley ending to one of the most tension-filled stories I have had the privilege to read! Brava!
Wednesday, 06 February 2008 14:29
Very cool ending to a great story.
Wednesday, 06 February 2008 21:34
Wonderful endcap there! Especially the light blinking under the dino's foot!
Wash still looking after them after all this time. I love it. What a story, Jane.
Wednesday, 06 February 2008 23:00
Loved this whole gorram story to bits. I loved the conversation between Mal and River at the end and had a smile a mile wide at Mal talking to Wash and thanking him then the light blinking under the dinosaur's foot when he left, kind of like Wash was winking at him. This was superb, thanks! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 07 February 2008 04:29
I don't have any fingernails left and I was getting ready to start on the toenails when this ended.

Loved it to pieces. And the ending was perfect.
Friday, 08 February 2008 03:38
I think this may be my newest favorite thread of yours - until you write the next my favorite thread of yours! Loved the Mal and River moment at the end - pure sweetness. One could only hope that the future incarnation of Firefly will have a relationship with them half so sweet. And the Wash flavoring at the end was perfection itself. Glad to see tha your other characters like Dillon get recurring roles - kepps the world a little tighter. The humor was perfect.
Friday, 08 February 2008 10:20
a very fine arc indeed
Saturday, 26 April 2008 23:36
If I had nails to bite they would be gone. I bout wet myself on several occasions through this whole arc. You scared the bejeebus out of me. I'm hoping thaty there is smutty goodness in the offing for the next bits. I'm off to see. You rock!

Peace & Blessings,

Joanna

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