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Slender Thread - Part XI

Tuesday, February 5, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. At least Serenity's still in one piece, but there's no option now but to go to the last resort. NEW CHAPTER

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3611    RATING: 10.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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“Cap, I gotta say, there’s no guarantee it’ll work.” Kaylee held back on her anger at Mal hitting her husband, for whatever reason, or however warranted it may have been.

“Don’t have a choice. And Wash was convinced it would.”

“I been looking at it, checking out what he did.” She shrugged. “Maybe it will. But it’ll mean turning everything off. Literally. We ain't got main life support now, and there’s no guarantee anything’ll come back on. And I’m gonna have to use the power from auxiliary life support to push through Wash’s system, make it boot up, and –”

Mal put his hands on her shoulders, made her look into his eyes. “Kaylee. If the auxiliary goes down anyway we’ve got maybe, what, two hours air left? Then we’re gone. Doesn’t matter if the ship blows up, or the airlocks open. We won’t be around to feel it. And Zoe and the kids’ll be stranded. If you can come up with another option, fine, I’ll be mighty glad to hear it. But right now, this is it. And we don’t have time to be putting this to a vote.”

She stared into his face, seeing the determination there, and it seemed to transfer from his skin to hers. “ Hao de ,” she said quietly.

“Good girl.”

She pushed past him and started flicking switches on the panels above her workstation, muttering to herself under her breath. “Need to invert the polarisation in case it tries to … then block the …”

“Anything I need to be doing?” Mal interrupted.

She didn’t even look round. “Get to the bridge. If this works, you’ll be able to power up, stop us. I’ll have to stay here, get her running again by hand.”

“You want Simon?”

“Better,” Kaylee conceded. “There’s more’n I can do alone.”

“Doc,” Mal ordered.

“In all honesty I think I’d rather stay with my wife anyway,” Simon said, rubbing his jaw, the bruise beginning to show already. “I wouldn’t want to get punched again.”

“That?” Mal smiled. “Just a love tap, doc.” He put his hand on the younger man’s shoulder and squeezed gently before striding for the bridge

Comments
Tuesday, 05 February 2008 13:22
Great job! Glad to see Wash's solution was the one to save the day. This was a wonderful arc and would have been perfect as an episode on TV. You really caught the spirit of tension and crisis perfectly. And loved the introspection of each character.
Tuesday, 05 February 2008 16:07
What an excellent story. The dialog the tech talk, Wash saving the day, all of it fit so well.
I think this is my favorite story you have written. At least until the next one. Great job.
Tuesday, 05 February 2008 17:40
the fix for most most computer glitches is to cut power and then power back up. How many times have I done that trick?

But I didn't do it with so much tension, angst and fantastic story telling.
Tuesday, 05 February 2008 21:29
Excellent. I caught myself literally holding my breath when Kaylee did her thing and the ship didn't start right up! Loved it!
Wednesday, 06 February 2008 10:40
Loved, loved, LOVED this! Brilliant, so full of tension and anxiety and praying and such... Every word had me hanging on the edge and I just love how Mal and Freya can mind link like that. Can't wait to see the family all back together again, this has been super shiny! Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 06 February 2008 13:12
really enjoyed this - you move in and out of characters' hearts like a dancer. i'm envious.

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