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Slender Thread - Part X

Monday, February 4, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Freya attempts to get Hank inside, and something really bad happens. NEW CHAPTER

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3648    RATING: 9.0 (G)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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He’d given up. He’d had to. The hatch wouldn’t open, no matter what he did, and he’d had to accept it. Now he sat back on the hull, staring at the stars, and pondered what to do next.

He was leaning towards panicking uncontrollably, but did think that should be kept in reserve. Like for when his oxygen tank showed zero, or his ass got frostbite, whichever came first. It even crossed his mind that perhaps he should push off from the plating and see if his momentum could carry him to the shuttle keeping pace with the Firefly.

“And how would Zoe cope with that?” he wondered aloud. “Seeing me heading for her, then splatting across the window like some bug? All wings and intestines.” He shuddered. “Probably not a good idea.”

Wishing he could ease the irritation caused by the sweat pooling around his waist, he glanced down at the air reading on his wrist again. Less than thirty minutes. So maybe it was time to consider panicking after all.

“I’m gonna miss you,” he said softly, watching the shuttle. “Miss Ben growing up. All the other kids we might have had. Then being able to show our grandchildren how to fly, and teach them all the bad habits you won’t let me teach Ben.” He sighed. “I miss you, Zoe.”

Then someone touched him on the shoulder.

“Gah!” he screamed, leaping to his feet so fast that he lost contact with the hull, and it was only that someone’s fast reflexes stopped him floating away.

The figure waggled a finger in front of him, chastising him, then pulled him closer so he could see through the faceplate.

“Frey?” he yelped.

She smiled at him, the internal lighting illuminating the planes of her face and making her features sharper. She mouthed something, but he couldn’t make out what it was.

“What? Can‘t hear you.” He tried to shrug inside the suit, but it barely moved.

She rolled her eyes at him, and he had to smile. Even out here, facing certain death, and she still got annoyed with him. He’d got them all trained well.

She leaned forward so that

Comments
Monday, 04 February 2008 16:02
My heart was in my throat during this entire chapter! Ai ya, woman, what are you going to do next?! :D
Monday, 04 February 2008 16:22
That was intense. Most of the crew is spread all over the verse now.
Hate to see this story coming to an end.
Monday, 04 February 2008 18:18
Absolutely brilliant! Now if I can just get my poor heart re-started... I can't remember how many times I cried "Oh God", that was heart in my throat time. Bit puzzled as to why the AI didn't finish them off but them if the vessel is all screwed up it is going to be doing some things randomly I guess. Don't know how long our valiant crew can survive with all this near death stalking them but I am hoping like crazy you have a way out for them. Great work, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Monday, 04 February 2008 19:45
It's like Fright Night in Space! Awesome!
Monday, 04 February 2008 19:49
I have a feeling that the crew needs to thank the Space Monkeys, otherwise they'd already been gone. I admit that I have a special place in my heart for Kaylee and her abilities with the engine.

They'll figure it out somehow. They always do.
Tuesday, 05 February 2008 01:45
What a ride that was! You must like knowing you're putting people's hearts in their throats. Truly exciting - looking forward to hearing how Serenity fared. Poor Zoe.
Tuesday, 05 February 2008 12:44
well you are still out to induce comment fatigue huh? another great chapter - a sense of genuine peril - and the reader is always in the thick of the action.
Tuesday, 08 July 2008 15:57
GAH!!! I just about had a heart attack! Sheesh.. talk about angst.

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