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Slender Thread - Part VII

Wednesday, January 30, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Things are going from bad to worse, and Mal has to make a hard decision. NEW CHAPTER

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While Freya went to get the other torches out of the supply locker, Hank felt his way along the corridor to the bridge. “You know,” he said conversationally, trying to drown out the panic roaring in his ears, “this is one of the times I’m glad Jayne ain’t on board. Big lunk like him, I’d probably be falling over him.”

“I doubt that,” Zoe said behind him, barely able to see him moving against the dull glow from the stars. “He can be pretty light on his feet when he wants to be.”

“Yeah, but I’m not. Gorram it.” He leaned down to rub at his shin where he’d just whacked it on the bottom step. “Why can’t this place all be on one level?” he complained. “Steps, stairs, ladders … I get more exercise just going for a coffee than is needful.”

“You know it’s there,” his wife pointed out.

“Hey, I'm just generally moaning here,” Hank said, turning to look at her but only getting an impression of her eyes, smiling gently at him. “I hate to admit it, seeing as I'm a strong, silent kind of guy, but I’m more than a little scared.” He jumped as he felt her hand on his chest.

“I'm here, honey. Not going anywhere. You need to hold onto that, not think about the dark.” She knew, as she always did, that his claustrophobia was playing up, and she tried to emulate Freya by projecting calming thoughts.

“I’ll be better when I can see the stars,” he admitted, taking hold of her fingers and leading her up the steps.

“I can see what you mean,” she said, staring out at the expanse of black, amazed at the light that was coming from so far distant. It gave the bridge an unworldly glow that seemed appropriately in keeping with their current circumstances.

Hank let the sight wash through him, and the tightness in his chest relaxed a little. Letting go of Zoe’s hand he sat down, attempting to find anything alive in the system. Despite his best efforts, button after button remained unlit, and switches just clicked.

Ezri san zhi jiao mao lu ,” he said under his breath, adding out loud, ”This is ridicu

Comments
Wednesday, 30 January 2008 14:31
Oh the angst, the tension, the shivers up the spine! It's just so . . . supernatural! I love it! LOVE IT! MOre soon, before my imagination runs away with me!
Wednesday, 30 January 2008 15:58
Excellent! Talk about the tension building. I loved it when Hank kicked the console and some of the systems came back on line, reminded me of when Han did that to the Millenium Falcon. But my oh my, do I have a bad feeling about this. Can't wait for the next part, hope it comes before my fingernails are all gone. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 30 January 2008 22:39
Heart-wrenching to have to send the kids away. And if it were me, I'd want to be wher Zoe is, because I'm fair certain she can handle anything that comes along! :D
Wednesday, 30 January 2008 22:50
Exciting stuff.
Thursday, 31 January 2008 10:09
i can't get no relief!!!!:)

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