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Slender Thread - Part IV

Sunday, January 27, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Over on the derelict, Mal and the others take a look around, but find more questions than answers. NEW CHAPTER

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As Kaylee searched for the part she needed, accompanied by Zoe in case of emergency, and satisfied her itch of curiousness at the same time, Hank and Mal headed for the bridge. To both men’s surprise it turned out to be small, not much larger than Serenity’s. Its surfaces might have been shiny chrome, but it had an air of lost hope, as if it had been alone for decades.

“Somehow I thought it would be more impressive,” Hank said, sitting down in the seat in front of the main console under the screen that spanned the room. His keen eye ran over the array of controls, and in a moment he found the one he wanted. The screen started to glow into life, and suddenly the stars came out. He grunted in pleasure, his claustrophobia easing a little.

“No space for a co-pilot,” Mal observed. “’Less one of these is.” He touched the back of one of the four chairs facing the wall either side.

“Can’t see that’s likely. Looks to me more like they’re for checking analyses of some kind, but don’t ask me what.”

Mal leaned forward, and realised some of the dials and read-outs reminded him of the infirmary. “Some kind of telemetry?”

“Maybe. But this ain’t like anything I’ve seen before, so for all I know this could be making sure the coffee machine’s hot enough.”

“Well, you come across that machine, you let me know. I could do with one right now.” Mal returned to his pilot’s side. “Can you find the switch for the net?”

“It might take me a while. I don’t want to go pressing things I don’t have to, just in case something nasty happens.”

“Like what?”

“Oh, like maybe the zombies hidden deep in the bowels of the ship wake up and come out to attack us.”

Inside his suit Mal raised his eyebrows. “Zombies?”

“Or maybe vampires. Hanging upside down from the conduits.”

“Hank, that’s it. No more scary movies for you. I’ve seen you on the late watch.“

“Have to have something to do,” Hank complained.

“Then take one of your books with you. Honestly, they’re bad enough, but horror vids? Banned.

Comments
Sunday, 27 January 2008 12:10
No relief for the spookiness I see:) I'm on edge still, wondering what you've got in store next!
Sunday, 27 January 2008 13:45
I have no idea what's going to happen either but the Blue Sun logo is ominous.
Sunday, 27 January 2008 14:11
Wow, way to keep up the tension and move the story along. Why do I get the horrible dread feeling that the jagged light running across one of the panels was activating some special nastiness, courtesy of our old enemies at Blue Sun? Just hope Mal makes it back to the ship in time before something really BAD happens. See? You've spooked me too! Well done, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 27 January 2008 19:53
WOnderfully visual descriptions, of the jagged bone, and the dark nature of the ship. Time for more suspense!
Sunday, 27 January 2008 19:57
Just when you think things can't be any more morbid and creepifying, the Blue Sun logo comes up. Yikes!
Monday, 28 January 2008 15:03
Spooky ship. Glad everyone made it off intact.

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