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Slender Thread - Part III

Friday, January 25, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. With no choice but to head over to the derelict, Mal and his crew try to find out what's going on. NEW CHAPTER

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“Inverse tractor net.” Hank looked around at the assembled adults, like he’d performed an amazing trick.

Everyone waited for Jayne to grunt, “Huh?” so they didn’t have to, but as the big man was still on Persephone there was silence. It took Simon to say, “I don’t know what that is.”

Hank might have looked gratified if he wasn't feeling so worried. “It’s like a tractor beam, but it’s passive.”

“No, that still doesn’t help.”

Mal glanced out of the bridge window at the dark ship. “We’re a damn sight closer than we were,” he observed. “That have something to do with it?”

Hank nodded. “We were fine just sitting here, even moving around it, but as soon as I tried to pull us away, it pulled back.”

“It?”

“Tractor net.”

“Then why haven’t we crashed into it?” Kaylee asked, taking hold of Simon’s hand.

“Because it’s an inverse. Soon as I stopped trying to get away, we stopped moving towards it.” He shook his head in disbelief. “And believe me, that was hard. Just to stop the engines. Blind faith that we weren’t just going to end up a smear on the hull out there.”

“Did we trip it somehow?” Freya inquired softly.

“I don’t think so. In fact, I think maybe that’s what you’ve been feeling all along.” Hank looked up at her. “It’s a low grade field, until you do something crazy like try to fly away, but if you’re sensitive it might be like fingernails down a chalkboard.”

“I’ve never been susceptible before,” she objected.

“Well, I doubt you’ve come across any before. Took me a while to even remember hearing about it once, long time ago when I was still in flight school.” He peered back out at the ship that was causing all the problems. “It was something was bandied about a few years ago, but no-one could make it work properly, and sure as hell not on this scale. It’s the same technology that scrappers use for their nets, but being passive it takes more control, more energy.”

“So she has power?” Freya moved forward, almost to the thick glass, staring out at the mass almo

Comments
Friday, 25 January 2008 17:47
I really don't like this at all. I get a very bad feeling too and I can't wait to find out what's going on.

Saturday, 26 January 2008 00:24
This is a lot more science fictiony than normal - interesting!
Saturday, 26 January 2008 00:29
Oooh, this is bad, VERY bad. I have that awful feeling that the seemingly deserted ship floating dead in the Black is no such thing. I think it's a gorram trap and the spider is just waiting to catch as many of the flies as possible. Gorramit, it sure does feel creepy. Great writing. Ali D :~)
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Sunday, 27 January 2008 05:01
Well now I'm all creepified. But I must say it seems good to read about Hank doing a little something new!
Wednesday, 30 January 2008 14:43
this was just a great chapter!:)

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