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Slender Thread - Part I

Tuesday, January 22, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. Set straight after WORLD WITHOUT END. Just a little intro of soft fluffiness ... lulling you into that sense of security ... ... ... NEW STORY

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Later …

“I can’t stop it, Mal!”

“That opens up, we’re all dead!”

“You think I don’t know that?”

“Do something!”

“Nothing’s working …”

He slammed his hand on the com. “Kaylee! Get out of there. Now!”

---

Before …

They made delivery of the cattle to Achaeon with no problems on the way, bar a somewhat heavy odour that seemed to find its way into every crevice of the ship. Sir Warwick Harrow’s estate appeared to take up the entire southern continent, and as they came in to land, they flew over herds of horses, scattering from the noise, and in the distance there were other dark masses moving over the lush grasslands.

“Nice place,” Hank murmured. “Amazing what having money does for you.”

“Doesn’t buy you happiness,” Mal said, leaning on the back of his chair.

“No, no. But you can be gorram comfortable in your misery.”

“I’ll just be glad to get our four-legged passengers off my boat.”

“Yeah, but Bethie likes them.” Hank tilted the thrusters and cut back on the power.

“She likes anything that breathes and don’t talk back.” Mal shook his head a little. “I think she sees ‘em all as big puppies.”

“Just so long as she doesn’t attempt to talk you into letting her keep one.”

Mal put his hand on the pilot’s shoulder in an almost benevolent fashion. “Hank, she already tried.”

---

The estate manager was more than pleased. “These’ll be the basis for a good herd,” he said, running his hands over the back quarters of one of the cows, who kicked out slightly. The man avoided it easily, his economy of movement speaking of long practice.

“I figured they were more quality than the usual beef on the hoof,” Mal agreed, standing leaning on the holding area railing. Even without Jayne’s help it had been easy to get the cargo off Serenity. “Smooth lines.”

“You know your cattle?” The manager was surprised.

“Didn’t always captain a Firefly. Grew up on a ranch. Fair-sized herd.”

“Well, you’ve not lost your eye. These are all from good stock, an

Comments
Wednesday, 23 January 2008 00:17
Uh oh, just knew something had to go wrong - it was all going too smooth. By the way, I notice you keep posting little MAYA stories on Fanfiction.net that don't show up here. I hope you intend to put them up here at some point so everyone can get a chance to keep up. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 23 January 2008 02:14
You reached your limit on fluffines and happiness, right? Now it's back to wondering who's gonna get it. Love your fluff, love your angst, just glad you mix them up - gives my heart a chance to recover.
Wednesday, 23 January 2008 03:48
OK, ready for the angst after that little bit of fluff.
Wednesday, 23 January 2008 13:00
Jane0904 thanks for explaining that the stories on fanfcition.net are earlier ones which have already appeared here. Really appreciate that, hugs, Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Wednesday, 23 January 2008 16:30
Off to a good start. With two of the deadliest crew members not around this could be interesting.
Saturday, 26 January 2008 19:07
And we're off on another adventure! Well done!

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