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Homesick: Chapter 7

Saturday, January 19, 2008

Kaylee and Inara get closer to Simon and River, while River makes a call to Mal. Simon despairs in prison and Kaylee pines after him. Simon/Kaylee, hints of Mal/Inara.

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Homesick: Chapter 7

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There weren’t too many places Kaylee felt out of place. She was open-minded, full of love and had a smile that could melt even the meanest heart, and these traits often added up to not only put herself at ease, but often softened even the sharpest temperament.

However, as she stood beside Inara in the grand foyer of the training house, surrounded by gold leafing and floor to ceiling canvases, swathed in sky blue silk, her hair pinned and makeup perfect, Kaywinnet Lee Frye felt like the biggest fish out of water. And what was worse, she was petrified the fancy lady who was greeting Inara now was going to figure it out.

“Inara, I must say I was surprised to get your wave.”

With her shining and polished veneer of nonchalance firmly in place, Inara greeted the house mistress with a kiss to each cheek and told her easily, “Well, I really felt that my pupil could use some time learning with other students. There is only so much I can teach her.”

Giving her a wry look, Mistress Penelope muttered, “I doubt that.” As the two old friends shared a smile, Penny turned her attention to Kaylee who was doing her best not to fidget. It was hard; Inara had preened and primped her, her hair piled in a huge mound on the top of her head, her finger nails painted, her face covered in various kinds of makeup and her body wrapped in a silken dress that was the smoothest thing Kaylee had ever worn. Smiling politely, she did her best to keep her back straight and her eyes forward as Penny did a slow circle around her.

“She really is lovely, Inara,” the woman confided. “A bit older than some of our girls perhaps, but-“

“On the Rim, it doesn’t matter as much,” Inara interjected.

Extending her hand to Kaylee, Penny greeted her. “I am Mistress Penelope Nguyen. It is a pleasure to make your acquaintance.”

Taking the woman’s offered hand, Kaylee curtsied as smoothly as she could before brushing her lips over the back

Comments
Saturday, 19 January 2008 04:39
Interesting and i could see mal not being sure and kinda half always planning on going but not saying something. The only thing i can critic is I think he would have said something when Kalyee left. But thats just a matter of oppinion. Look forward to the next part.
Saturday, 19 January 2008 13:02
Nutluck, I also think Mal would have said something when Kaylee, his *mei mei*, left. It seemed so out of character. This chapter is better and I just loved River and simon in this though I am worried that Chen now knowing that the siblings are considered to be telling the truth will make him move faster. Just hope our Big Damn Heroes can get them rescued in time! Ali D :~)
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Saturday, 19 January 2008 14:54
I was thinking that maybe Mal thought that Simon and River needed time to sort things out with their parents. Sorta to bring closure to that part of their lives before returning to Serenity. This is sort of what seems to be happening. Besides, if the warrents get lifted, then it will make life all manner of easier for them. Mal is stubborn, but I would expect he would have said at least something. I'm just waiting for Kaylee to slip up and say 'aint.'
Saturday, 19 January 2008 18:55
To all:

Mal's reluctance to go after the siblings was a bit like what Roninwriter described - he's not totally convinced that they don't belong on Osiris. That everything that happened with Miranda, maybe them going back to that life would be better for them. Certainly safer, in Mal's opinion.

Thanks for pointing out what didn't seem true. To be fair, my incomparable beta, Leiasky, also pointed out that Mal's reaction seemed a bit out of character. The shortcomings to the story are simply my own - I was trying for something and I guess I didn't quite nail it.

Thanks for continuing to read. This is one of my shorter FF stories, so we've only got about 7-8 chapters left.
Saturday, 19 January 2008 21:09
I think Mal was really afraid of loosing more crew but he certainly couldn't expect Kaylee to stay hands on belly when Simon was in danger - the fact that Inara and she teamed up and went on their own is worrying him more... that's just my humble opinion. Would you blame me if I told you that River's daddy sucks? He just CAN'T take her as a prisoner in her own room!!

Also liked the scene between Mal and Zoe... nice move Zo!

Keep flyin' ;)
Tuesday, 22 January 2008 11:53
your writing is pursuasive enough - i can follow where you take the characters, everything has integrity to the writing (if that makes sense) people may question characters - coming from the show - but everything here (in your take on the verse) is well motivated and truthsome.

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