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Inferno – Chapter Twenty-three

Saturday, January 12, 2008

Home is where the ship is, and Pirates should know better

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Inferno – Chapter Twenty-three

Author doesn’t own Firefly, doesn’t make money for this, desperately doesn’t want to be sued.

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The pirate ship had waited, systems down, until the Firefly had left the station. Once their intended target had set a course, they had followed, at a distance. The captain and mate had decided, after much discussion, to wait at least twenty-four hours before hitting the ship, allowing it to get as far away as possible from any help.

Now, they were closing steadily on the target, gaining with each passing minute.

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“We may have a problem,” River said quietly, and Jayne looked up from the magazine he was reading.

“What’s wrong?” he asked, moving across to where River sat.

“We’ve picked up a shadow,” River told him. “Pirates,” she added after a minute of concentration. “They are getting ready to hit us.”

“Will this never end?” Jayne complained. “I mean for the love o’. . .”

“Problems, kid?” Goldie asked, as he and Liam arrived to take the watch. Goldie moved over to the cortex, and attached a small black box to the receiver.

“What’s that?” Jayne demanded. “Dammit, Goldie, we got pirates on our rear. I ain’t got time for. . .”

“Easy, kid,” Goldie held up a placating hand. “It’s like this. Liam was out, mindin’ his own business, when he happened to overhear some. . .gossip, let’s call it. So he came and told me about it, and then, he and I. . .”

“You did this without bothering to tell me?” Jayne demanded, once Goldie finished his ‘narrative’. Goldie nodded.

“You got a lot on you, kid,” Goldie said defensively. “We were just trying to help. That’s all.”

“Jayne,” River stood on her toes and whispered in his ear. He flushed red at whatever she told him, but nodded.

“Well, if it works, it’ll save us a pack o’ trouble, that’s for sure,” Jayne told them, anger suddenly abated. “We’ll wait and see if they open a channel to us.”

As he said that, a burst of cannon fire erupted near the bridge window, shaking the ship, and the incoming

Comments
Saturday, 12 January 2008 01:32
THAT WAS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I wish they had blown up the pirates, not EMPed them. Or at least waved someone to come haul their asses in to pay for what they had done.

Awesome fic, keep it up, PLEASE?!?!
Saturday, 12 January 2008 04:24
I was kinda hoping for a bomb too, but at least they were dealt with. This has been outstanding and I'll take all I can get, please?
Saturday, 12 January 2008 13:20
I actually am glad that Goldie **didn't** blow up the pirate ship after all if only because they would be left adrift to contemplate the fact that they were going to die and there was no one to help them. Might make them consider just what twisted *tamade hundans* they had been and what it felt like to be on the receiving end. Secondly I was glad because this way there is nothing to point to the deaths being due to something Serenity's crew had done so no one will be out looking for them in any official capacity. My only worry is if some poor unsuspecting ship comes across the pirates before they have breathed their last as I don't think they would hesitate to turn the help unlooked for into an opportunity to profit at the rescuers cost.

And last but not least I **LOVED** the crew being reunited, that has to be the shiniest part of all! Sigh. Felt awful having them split into two crews on two ships, hated that even though the storyline worked really well, still felt off kilter. Plus having Mal back with them was like the icing on the cake and so loved little Chelsea being able to choose to be with River and Jayne so they can put in the papers for adoption. Very very shiny! *Xie xie ni*, Ali D :~)
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