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Sunday, April 20, 2008

Jayne decides to leave after the damage from Miranda is put right.

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 3480    RATING: 8.0 (PG13)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Jayne sighed in exasperation as Mal turned down the job. It would have paid a goodly amount of coin, and there was no good reason to say no that Jayne could see.

He followed Mal back to the ship in silence, knowing it was useless to argue. Since Zoe’s announcement that she was expecting, this had been the way of it. They took only the easiest jobs, those that practically guaranteed no violence, and, as a result, no real payday. They were flying, and eating, and that was about it.

“What’s wrong with you?” Mal grumbled, eyeing the silent Jayne.

“Nothin’,” Jayne replied. “Why?”

“You’re sulkin’,” Mal informed him. “Wanna know why.”

“I ain’t,” Jayne protested, seeing the ship in the distance. “I know what you’re doin’, and why. I don’t gotta like it, and I don’t. But I ain’t said nothin’.”

“You don’t like it, you ain’t gotta stay,” Mal shot back. Jayne thought about that.

After Miranda, Jayne had seriously thought about leaving. He hadn’t because somewhere along the way he’d started thinking of the crew as family, and the ship as home. And they’d needed him.

He couldn’t say that, of course. Not that they’d believe him anyway. And, if he was honest, he didn’t care. He’d never done things with what others thought in mind, anyway.

But Mal had been down, hard, and so had Simon and Kaylee. Zoe wasn’t much better. Inara and River hadn’t been physically injured, but emotionally they were both wrecks. Jayne had been shot, and had several broken bones, but no one had really cared about that. He was Jayne, after all. Why bother worrying about him?

Jayne hadn’t minded that, either. It had been a while since he was around others that cared for him more than they could get out of him, and he didn’t mind. He knew what he was about, and that was all that mattered.

Light years away, on a dusty moon that no one visited very often, was a large family. They would have done all right for thems

Comments
Sunday, 20 April 2008 10:03
I can imagine there might come a time that Jayne would decided he had to leave Serenity but not for a minute do I think Mal would not have said a quiet word to him or not told him he was needed. Though I think he would also have let Jayne know that ultimately the decision was his to take but he would be sorry if he left but understand. This take is more bleak and makes it seem as if no one gives a good gorram about him except maybe River and that isn't true. Or are you planning a sequel in which he finds out just how much the others really do care? Now *that* would be neat. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Sunday, 20 April 2008 13:59
All I can do is echo Amdobell. Seems like someone besides River would have told Jayne that he was needed.
Sunday, 20 April 2008 15:02
Chimes in me toooooo. Taps badkarma on da shoulder and does her best Jayney imitation growl.."gorrammit there had BETTER be a sequel buster!!!!!!"

Grins and hugs ya...another good one darlin

Sunday, 20 April 2008 18:47
Awww. I'll take Jayne in and keep him happy [GG].

Vera
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Monday, 21 April 2008 02:47
Although I think you should be horse whipped outta town for thinking the crew would be so unfeelin' towards Jayne, I am sure that there is another boot to drop in this story. So I'll wait patient like, whip in hand. Don't disapoint us boy!
Monday, 21 April 2008 04:20
I'm not a bandwagoner so won't join the previous comments on his more or less silent eventless departure.

I think you write well and it kept my attention. Shiney. Let's hear more.....
Monday, 21 April 2008 16:25
Wow! nice

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