KISPEXI2

Tuesday, 31 August 2004 14:47

I love it! But it's a lot to get on a shirt ... maybe a duvet cover?

Wallpaper! Actual paper for walls.

Brightened my afternoon. Thanks.

BRITCHICK

Tuesday, 31 August 2004 15:38

Can you fit it on the back of a shirt?
It looks great!

For the front I would personally prefer a discreet Serenity (maybe with a date) logo on the left hand breast of the shirt. Do you think that might be possible?

BRITCHICK

Tuesday, 31 August 2004 15:43

ooh, couple of really nitpicky things.
verse should really be 'verse

shoot em should really be shoot 'em

companion dating policy should be Companion dating policy

And finally should be And finally:

Sorry if I',m being really anal. Don't mean to be.

preempted should be pre-empted (I think)

STILLSHINY

Tuesday, 31 August 2004 16:18

I appreciate all the input. Right now I'm struggling with the size issue. Everything has to be within a 8 x 10 or 10 x 8 space. I may have to reduce the list a bit. ACK!!!

STILLSHINY

Tuesday, 31 August 2004 16:55

Hey, it's up at Zazzle check it out!

STILLSHINY

Tuesday, 31 August 2004 16:56

http://www.zazzle.com/contributors/products/gallery/browse_results.asp?cid=238187680745956238

ok I got carried away & forgot to add a link.

CHRONICTHEHEDGEHOG

Tuesday, 31 August 2004 17:21

"If the planets coming up to quick" should be "If the planet's coming up too quick"

ANONYMOUS

Tuesday, 31 August 2004 17:30

one more nit pick for a fun shirt design...
I think you need an apostrophe and another "o"...
"If the planet's coming up too quick..."

Love the "And finally..." part!

REGINLEIF

Tuesday, 31 August 2004 17:48

Really awesome! That will make a shiny helluvah shirt...

ANGELLEPHOENIX

Thursday, 02 September 2004 02:01

Sweet, Mon Ami.