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World Without End - Part II

Wednesday, January 2, 2008

Maya. Post-BDM. River explains a little more about her decision, and Freya sees. NEW CHAPTER

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“River, what are you talking about?” Freya sat down next to the young woman. “Jayne’s upstairs in the shuttle with Ethan and Jesse. He’s fine.”

“Won’t be.”

Freya glanced at Mal, who went down onto his heels in front of her. “Albatross, you seen something?”

River nodded slowly. “If I stay, he’ll die.”

“Not sure that won’t happen if you leave anyway,” Mal pointed out, not looking at Freya.

“What did you see, River?” his wife asked, knowing exactly what he was referring to, but deciding, this time, not to pursue it.

“Does it matter?”

“Of course it does.” She pointed out of the door. “That man loves you so much and now thinks he’s done something wrong.”

“He hasn’t!”

“Then you need to tell him.”

“I … I’m scared.”

“Of Jayne?”

“No. That he’ll die.”

Mal stood up, his knees complaining. “This don’t make sense, River. And if you don’t tell us some more, it never will.”

“Can you show me?” Freya asked, taking River’s hand.

The young woman shook her head. “Too much static.”

“We could try.”

“Might hurt you.”

“Then tell us.”

River screwed her eyes closed for a moment, her face taking on an agonised expression. “I can’t. It’ll make it come true.”

“That doesn’t happen,” Mal said softly. “Point of fact, if you talk about a bad dream –“

“It wasn't a dream!”

“No, okay, so it wasn’t a dream,” he backpedalled a little, the anger on her face making him pause. “But if you don’t tell us, we can’t help.”

“Won’t be able to help,” she whispered. “Can’t stop it.”

Mal and Freya looked at each other. Can you see? He let the words coalesce in his mind.

No. Too much static to get through. Freya pinched the bridge of her nose, feeling the ache already behind her eyes. “Sweetheart, you have to be clearer.” She took River’s hand. “I … we don’t understand.”

“I can’t. The words won’t come.”

“River?” Simon came out of the infirmary. “Are you okay?”

“Your sister wants to leave us,” Mal said, crossing his arms.

“Leave?” The yo

Comments
Wednesday, 02 January 2008 14:01
Oh, what an awful situation for River! Here's to hoping that the crew can figure a way around what she sees! Good work!
Wednesday, 02 January 2008 14:28
The problem with psychic visions and prophecies is that one never knows what one is supposed to do to stop it. Her running off may very well lead to her would-be kidnappers and to Jayne's ending.
Neat story looking forward to more.
Wednesday, 02 January 2008 19:35
Wow. tension building nicely, and a mystery to boot. awesome story line so far, and I'm looking forward to more.
Thursday, 03 January 2008 00:06
That is exactly my fear, Stormwolfdawn. Damned if you do, damned if you don't. Maybe it isn't River that has or should do anything at all but the rest of the crew making sure there are always a couple of them around so that River and Jayne are never alone in such a situation. Pity Freya didn't get a good enough look at the *hundan* to recognise them. Would have been nice to have enough information to set THEM up instead. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Thursday, 03 January 2008 04:51
Ouch. Back to angst so soon - and another excellent storyline!

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