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Letters to Home

Wednesday, January 2, 2008

Ever wonder what Jayne's letters to his ma were like?

CATEGORY: FICTION    TIMES READ: 1528    RATING: 9.0 (PG)    SERIES: FIREFLY

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Letters to Home

by Mike Smithwick

Adapted with permission from the Virtual Firefly script by Thomas Cohn and DC Washington

http://www.stillflying.net

(note: the software on this site doesn't preserve the original formatting of the text. You might want to read the story on Fanfiction.net, which keeps the formatting and so is a bit easier to read.)

Chapter 1

Even as the elegant couple whirled among the many guests of Persephone’s annual ball, they were alone and quite content to just be with each other during this most dignified of events.

“I’m trying to give you something. A life. If you want it,” Atherton Wing whispered in the ear of his stylish partner. “You can live here,” he offered, dropping his disarming voice even more. “As my personal companion.”

The chamber orchestra changed tempo slightly, and the couples instinctively changed to match.

“Atherton, you are a generous man.” Inara replied, smiling gently, even slightly embarrassed at the proposition.

They glided by the mountains of the freshest and most expensive fruit, ignoring the young women in the corner and the gossip they must be sharing.

“That’s not a ‘yes’…”

Inara paused. “But…you see…I couldn’t leave Serenity, or my captain.”

Her partner came to a sudden stop, causing a near collision on the dance floor from the other couples. Wing was shocked, for no one ever refused his requests. They couldn’t. In fact, they shouldn’t.

“You belong here, Inara, not on the flying piece of gho-se with that stupid captain of yours,” he protested.

“I said ‘no,’ Atherton. I’m sorry”

Changing from charming gentleman to demanding ruffian in an instant, he grabbed Inara by the arm and dragged her off the dance floor. The gossips in the corner couldn’t help but flutter over the sight, eagerly trying to capture any phrase, word or mere syllable so as to fill their bottomless cisterns of scandalous knowledge. Cisterns that would no doubt be empted time and time again over the following years.

He never saw the punch coming, the one t

Comments
Wednesday, 02 January 2008 17:12
I loved this. The idea that Jayne would rewrite the truth to make himself the hero is wonderful, but even better is that, when he gets the chance and acts heroic, it makes him realise he can't lie to his mother like that. And just the hint of Rayne at the end ... particularly with how River stole his hat so he's having to ask for another! Well done!
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Friday, 04 January 2008 16:31
Ok I have been a longtime reader, but I created an account just to comment on this fic. I started laughing out loud at the parts where river is saying 'I'm sooooooo crazy' So everyone here at the cube farm was already watching me. When Simon said 'Light it you humping humpers,' it was all over. That was Hi-larious go-se. Thank you for writing.

Keep flying - you can't take the sky from US.

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