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Inferno – Chapter Eleven

Saturday, December 29, 2007

And the smoke thickens

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Inferno – Chapter Eleven

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Jayne awoke to the very pleasant sensation of his wife kissing him softly. He slowly opened his eyes to see the face he hoped to see every morning for the rest of his life.

“You should have woke me up,” River told him softly. “Not slept on the floor.”

He wrapped his arms around her.

“You were sleeping so peacefully, for a change, I didn’t want to wake you,” he told her. “You needed rest, Angel.”

“I needed my husband,” she told him pointedly.

“Well, him you got,” he smiled, kissing her back. “And I was right here, if you needed me. I just wanted you to sleep while you could. I know the last week has been rough on you.”

“Yes,” she murmured, cuddling against him. “But not so bad, now.”

“Good,” he nodded. “I’m glad to hear that.” He lay there for a few more minutes, basking in the warmth of her lithe body atop his. Finally, he sighed.

“Baby, I’ve got to get up,” he told her, and she sighed.

“I know,” she replied, raising up. “But it felt so good,” she moaned.

“We’ll have plenty of time, once we’re off this moon,” he promised her. She grinned wickedly.

“I’ll hold you to that,” she warned.

“Good,” he said again, kissing her lightly. “I’m going to take Goldie and Liam with me. Turns out Goldie can fly the shuttle. Ship’s yours. If something happens, get into the air, and call us. We’ll mate up with you, somewhere.”

“I want to go with you,” River pouted, and Jayne shook his head.

“I want it too,” he surprised her. “But without Zoe up and around, you’re the only one who can fly. You’ve got to be here.”

“I know,” she sighed in defeat. “But you’ll be careful?” She looked up at him, pleadingly. “You promised to run away, remember?”

“Fast as I can,” he nodded. “We’re going to look for the Mann’s, get them, and get back. No shopping, no stopping,” he added with a grin, and she giggled.

“Let’s go.”

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Zoe stirred slightly, and Goldie was awake in an inst

Comments
Saturday, 29 December 2007 11:39
Very fine chapter. Glad to see the tiniest chink in Zoe's armour beginning to soften. Jayne is handling everything very well just as I would expect of him, the scenes with River were also very sweet. Glad you had River and Kaylee in a scene at the end as it seemed odd having no input from Kaylee. I can understand Mal feeling like a fish out of water in his new Sheriff's post, after all, he **is** a fish out of water. He needs to be back on Serenity not playing lawman. I'm thinking his investigator would be the perfect person to step up into his shoes. Ali D :~)
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 29 December 2007 19:21
I've enjoyed this story a great deal so far. And I really like Mal as a lawman, he's always had a clearly defined sense of right and wrong. I can't see him as an old man running a freighter around the black, but I could very easily picture him sitting out on the porch with a star on his chest. . .maybe a dog underfoot watching "his" town go about their business. Also with Jayne being my hero, I've enjoyed you building him up into more than an ignorant gunhand, and I'm also glad you didn't make it all roses for him. The trust issue is very believable and wasn't a far stretch from the characters we all know and love. Keep writing and I'll keep reading, thanks for sharing with us.

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