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Inferno – Chapter Four

Saturday, December 22, 2007

Jayne has had enough

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Inferno – Chapter Four

I don’t own Firefly, and I don’t get paid for this. But it’s so much fun.

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True to his word, the fuel tech got Companion next. Jayne was waiting when the man hauled around to the ramp.

“This ain’t gonna get you in trouble, right?” Jayne asked.

“Nah,” the man smiled tiredly. “Most folks, when they hear, ‘eleven hour backlog’, just say to wake’em when we get to’em. They’ll never know the difference.”

“Okay, then,” Jayne nodded, and turned to Kaylee. “All yours,” he smiled.

“Thank you, Jayne,” Kaylee whispered, and Jayne winked. “Come on around this way, sir,” she said to the tech, and with that Jayne was alone on the ramp.

“Jayne,” he heard Zoe’s voice behind him. Okay, he wasn’t alone. He turned.

“We’re taking fuel,” he said neutrally.

“We need to get some things straight, Jayne,” Zoe told him, and Jayne shrugged.

“No, we don’t,” he replied. “You’re the Captain, and you don’t want me doing anything that ain’t your idea. I got that. And I won’t be. So we’re straight.”

“Jayne, I don’t need this attitude, not right now,” Zoe shot back in exasperation.

“Zoe, I ain’t gave you any attitude,” Jayne kept his calm. “All the attitude I’ve seen is coming from you. What I can’t figure out is why.”

“I don’t like you making off and doing things on your own, without checking with me first,” Zoe told him sternly.

“I already told you, just now, you got nothing to worry about on that score. I won’t be ‘making off and doing’ anything in the future. When you want something done, you’ll tell me, and I’ll do it. Otherwise, I’m just here, hanging out.” Jayne held his hands up in a gesture of peace.

“Jayne,” Zoe warned, and that was the last straw for Jayne.

“What!” he demanded, fist balled in anger. “What is it? We’re on a tight schedule, trying to get to Kaylee’s folks before they fall victim to whatever’s left to hit the place! I saved us nine hours on fueling time, with a few kind words, and got some good information in the meantime. Do I hear, ‘good work, Jayn

Comments
Saturday, 22 December 2007 10:03
Oh, please don't let Jayne and River go... it's their home! I hope Goldie knoecked some sense into Zoe's head and that she'll apologize. It's also showing that Inara is quite stressed on the ship, geez, I think Mal is even more looking forward to see her. With what the stress of times an all... who knows? Maybe we'l get to see the couple reunited as a family again, they surely must miss eachother, especially Mal and Inara, simon and River... I really love this story!!

Keep flying ;)
Saturday, 22 December 2007 11:04
I really can't understand why Zoe is so over the top in this story. When she went out to talk to Jayne I was happy that she was finally going to apologise and explain that it was nothing personal just taking her stress out on him or some such but no, she has to have a go at him again which to my mind is not Zoe. Why waste words saying a thing over and over again, that's not like her. And I disagree about her taking a leaf out of Mal's Captain book, he would have handled Jayne much better. He knows when he needs to be firm and Captain-y and also when to ease up and give the man a bit of respect. It was learnt with time but the whole gorram crew know that Jayne won't turn on them now besides which - River can kill him with her brain if he tries (not that he would and not that she really would).

This will not fix itself or get anywhere near until Zoe says she's sorry and snaps out of the tense mood she is in. As for Mal, still don't like him landlocked and a Sheriff. As for Inara, I keep waiting for the other shoe to drop. Her 'crew' are being so good and well mannered it is making me nervous that something will go wrong. Hope Kaylee's family are okay. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me

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