Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL

Lifesize - Part IV

Friday, December 21, 2007

Maya. Post-BDM. Mal sees the finished painting, and River decides what to do with it. NEW AND CONCLUDING PART

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River led him through the linen curtains. “Come and see,” she repeated.

“Dear God in Heaven,” Mal murmured, taking a step backwards and letting go of her hand. “That’s …”

“I wanted to capture it all,” the young woman said, not hearing him. But I think I've gone too far.” She folded her legs under herself and sank gracefully to the floor.

“Too far?”

“Stolen from them. From you.”

He sat down, a little less elegantly, next to her. “How’d you figure that?”

“Taken something I shouldn’t.”

“Well, my pockets don’t seem no lighter than they did this morning. So I think you need to explain a little.”

“Captain-dummy talk?” She smiled slightly.

“If at all possible.”

She leaned against him. “On Earth-that-was, many cultures believed that taking a picture of someone stole a little piece of their soul. Take too many and they cease to exist.”

“And that’s what you think you’ve done here?” he asked, his voice soft, somewhat tender.

“Made it too real. Is it more real than the reality? Is the now fractured because of what I’ve done?” She shook her head, her dark hair coming undone even more from its haphazard clips. She stood up quickly. “I should destroy it before anyone else sees and becomes entwined in the glamour and can’t get loose. Before it sucks the life force from everyone, imprisoning it in canvas and paint.” She picked up something from the crate she was using as her table, lifting it high above her, and particles of light were slit along the razor edge.

“Whoa, there,” Mal said, scrambling to his feet. “That’s sharp.” He reached round her, his arm encircling her growing belly, and put his other hand on her raised one. “And I don’t think you wanna do this.”

She didn’t fight him, but there was an obstinacy in her that made her solid. “I do.”

“River, can I show you something?”

She was startled. “Show … me?”

“Yeah. Just something I carry with me. Only you need to put that knife down ‘fore you hurt yourself. Or me.”

She looked over her shoulde

Comments
Friday, 21 December 2007 13:49
Fantastic ending. The way you captured River in this story was amazing. You got the best of her not quite crazy, not quite sane attitude.
Friday, 21 December 2007 14:37
Beautifully done. Brava!
Friday, 21 December 2007 18:05
Loved the painting and the story. Serenity is a family and she'll keep both the painting and the real family safe.
Friday, 21 December 2007 23:24
Loved this but felt sad that River hid the painting away. I was hoping she would feel confident enough after everyone's reactions to hang it in the commons area so they could all enjoy her masterpiece. Shame that the only ones who will get to appreciate it now are the folks that come after when they are all dead and gone. Makes me all manner of sad. Ali D
You can't take the sky from me
Saturday, 22 December 2007 07:50
Oh man. I'm almost speechless. I don't know that I've ever read a better story. Thank you.
Thursday, 07 August 2008 02:58
Hurrah for RIver's magic. Thank you, Jane.
Monday, 02 November 2009 16:53
Talk about art..

Thank you.

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