Blue Sun Room FICTION - GENERAL
Firefly is the property of Joss Whedon, blah blah blah. You know the drill.
Thanks to Jebbypal and Apollo for beta reading. Feedback will of course be appreciated.
Note to those who have been following this story from the beginning: I've made significant revisions to Chapter One to correct some dodgy bits. You may want to reread it.
Comments
Tuesday, 31 August 2004 18:58
Zombie warriors?
Good chapter, much development. I did cringe over Zoe 'not bothering' to have a gun--Zoe?? The 'flashback to the POW camps' excuse Nitro used was a touch awkward in the presentation, sounded very excuse-like; he didn't sell it.
And now River recognizes him... interesting.
Good chapter, much development. I did cringe over Zoe 'not bothering' to have a gun--Zoe?? The 'flashback to the POW camps' excuse Nitro used was a touch awkward in the presentation, sounded very excuse-like; he didn't sell it.
And now River recognizes him... interesting.
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